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Hm. Take care to be back before Rarity wakes, Dash. Don't want to worry her.
I love how you use sentence structures to connect parts of the story! Reading this is amazing.
Normally I'd have something to say about how awesome this is, but I've been awake for about twenty-seven hours and my body demands some down-time, so I'll just settle for more praise.
This is amazing.
G'night.
Oh sweet - a new one! Super happy you are still working on this one :)
I hate it when a great story never gets finished. Count on me to be with you to the end!
Wow. Just wow.
good
Crap... I nearly forgot about this story... Thank you tracking list!
One of my favorite aspects of your writing, especially in this story, is the occasional playful banter between the characters. It's always just enough, and then pulls back before ever nearing a point where it could go too far. And with that, how you shift the emotional content of that dialogue until it's no longer banter, but a more serious moving forward of the core of the story. It feels very natural. Lovely writing.
Excellent chapter as always. Seriously, keep up the amazing work. :D
6514328 I agree with you; this story kinda ruined the ship for me, but in a good way. There really isn't any other RariDash fics that compare to the quality this story has (of which I've read thusfar).
I congratulate you, Gardez. Keep up the great work!
Been a long time coming Gardez.
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From what you guys are saying, If I'd read other RariDash fics I would probably say this fic redefines RariDash. I haven't, and I'm concerned other RariDash fics might seem subpar now. I don't know if I'm lucky or not to have chosen this fic first, but I definitely don't regret it at the moment.
Gardez, please continue sir. I'm still holding my punched ticket for this ride and after this chapter, currently reclining with a cigar and waiting to see what's next.
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I really loved those noir scenes.
6518899 Yeah, that was an awesome episode. XD
Ah, Pipsqueak... still fond of Sweetie Belle’s friends. How time flies. )
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Been putting off reading this update for a while, but finally found the time again. I'm really glad to see this fic back in action.
It's been a while so I don't quite remember, but is this the first confirmation of who Sweetiebelle's boyfriend has been all this time? And if so, was Pipsqueak the plan all along, or did Crusaders of the Lost Mark prompt a last minute change of plans?
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In fact, the first reference to Pipsy as Sweetie's coltfriend occurs way back in the chapter, In Dreams. So, it's been a while :)
And now after reading then all damn near straight I'm finally at the ending point for now. I tried to hold myself off but just couldn't. I knew it was a good idea to put this in the top shelf of my favorites and it never disappoints. Stories like these remind me of where I aspire to get with my own writing. Stellar work.
How long will this story be? Do you have an ending in mind?
A final swig.
IN her stomach
The song in my while I read this. Now I can't unthink of this fic when I listen.
You torture me with not continuing this!!!
Nice and sexy.
Ugh. I liked this story. I really did. But after the second mind rape - sorry, dream sequence - things just got cliche and stupid. We spent all that time on dashs relationship, and raritys entire confLict is wrapped up in essentially one long chapter. I know dash is loyalty but come on - Give us a little more ConfLict than "I would still live you even if you committed mass genocide".
I think that's the first sex scene I've read that I would describe as cathartic.