Sorry that Google Docs forced you to rewrite everything, but glad that Lightendark is back!
(1) Oh yeah, Cerise had that happen last time we saw her. And now she definitely has a foal from Sombra. Idk if this foal will be one of the two that are part of the Future timeline, don’t know how closely the Future followed the Present events, but I wonder if Midnight and Cerise will even stay together after this. Cause realistically this is a bit too much she has to go through.
Like every single time we go back and see Cerise suffer more, it kind of makes me want to see Midnight die more.
Don’t mistake this as me hating on Lightendark or on how you guys changed him. I love how much you guys make me think and feel. I’m just saying that Midnight’s actions have done a ton of damage to characters I’ve come to love. Like I can’t say he doesn’t deserve a happy ending, Zeloph and Shadow caused millions of deaths and yet Shadow’s own demise and Zeloph’s distraught hit me in the heart, and seeing them reunited was so touching. But their bad history feels distant now and they had arcs stretching across multiple stories. Midnight’s actions made everyone I like either suffer pain (Cerise, Moonlight, Penumbra) or turn everyone against him (Moxxi, Dion, Iclyn, etc). And that’s something that ain’t going to go away.
I keep forgetting that he’s still 18 and with the Hyper Stallion trait that causes lust to be the only answer, so yeah it was a freight train that was bound to collide, but the first time was a tragedy for both Midnight and Cerise as Midnight was forced by Doppia. This time it was a tragedy that Midnight caused himself, even if the others should’ve realized that making Midnight constantly enter his Hyper form and depend on lust for survival was something they should try and avoid.
Once Lightendark ends I might try and reread Lightendark from the Manor and see what my opinions of Midnight are once his arc is over. Maybe then I can forgive him lol XD
(2) Do have to say though, while the scenes that Cerise has to deal with are definitely bad for her, they are also incredibly hot. Chrysalis basically got what she wanted and her playing with Cerise, very well written!
Still feel bad for Cerise, especially since each time she sleeps she’ll get more nightmares from Omen (and as we’ve seen, Omen can also attack in the day as well). But hey, at least she managed to trade her ass for some more protection for the changelings.
Also feel bad that Trixie, Beatrix’s mom, is corrupted, but I mean, she also prevented Penumbra from breaking out from Sombra’s hold, though I think Vox already was in his mouth by then, so idk if things would’ve changed.
(3) Happy that Zeloph is tired for the right reasons, ie fucking his two girlfriends at the same time (literally), as well as eliminating the guy that took Shadow away in the first place. He’s no longer the Sigma Male he described himself in Lightendark: Search for Abadonna. He’s now an Alpha male! Would say Gigachad personality as well. XD
(4) Yeah, I’m also surprised how Midnight’s world is still surviving, I guess because it’s kind of a super dimension from all the other worlds being connected to it? And then when the time comes right, it’ll collapse leaving the entire multiverse empty. Forever…
(5) Dafuq??? *Visible confusion* Yeah, that was a bit weird seeing Zeloph and Eclipsed almost begin to have sex. I'm blaming She’Ba and I wouldn't be surprised if this is starting to happen to others. Kind of how Omen is attacking with nightmares, She’Ba could try the same thing?
It would be very ironic if everyone but Midnight is getting into a frenzy lust.
Or maybe what just happened is a Demi Human thing, especially since Zeloph got extremely laid. Maybe part of the equation that had Lucifer and Layla bond back when they first met?
Or maybe since he's now the Aether King he has more properties? Idk, but I want to see why this happened. Interesting plot point here.
(6) Zeloph and Eclipsed are now unofficial diplomats between the Cyberverse and the Demi Humans lol. Love how he realized that the number of Demi Humans have now grown lol. And technically there's more, Future Aba. Demi Trix “was” a Demi Human technically? RIP Mini Trix.
(7)(7) Zeloph completely healed Lightning’s eye! That’s incredible! Wait, then why would She’Ba and Omen go through the effort of giving Lightning’s statue an eyepatch? Does it automatically update itself? Or they’re not as omnipotent of all the outcomes as I thought they were?
(8) Lol, Chisana trying to see what Kyube and Kitsune are doing. Though I think many chapters before Kyube explained that Chisana simply took on the form of a child and that they’re actually older? But trying to translate the japanese to english text says “How many times do I have to say that I am a child?” which doesn’t make sense to what Eclipsed said.
(9) Don’t have much to comment about Zeloph explaining things to Seb and Arron, but hey at least Eclipsed has fully decided to stay for Cerise.
(10) Oh yeah, Moxxi said she’d help keep the bar open in the last chapter. Wow, it feels so long ago though. And given how many are sleeping and most of the bovines are having shaky legs, Moxxi and Wispy must’ve done a fantastic job!
(11) And again, Moon Hammer x Moonlight x Marathyssa was so good! I think it is definitely a top sex scene from Lightendark, if not number one!
(12) Yeah, Moonlight’s drunk. I find it humorous that sexy situations are still being thrown at Midnight despite everything that’s happened. Maybe Eclipsed was right with saying that Beatrix keeps stumbling upon sex-charged universes. Beatrix be having a Dragon Ball Radar for that.
I found it funny how Beatrix is holding Midnight in between her tits lol while talking to Eclipsed. Like Midnight probably just wants to leave if it weren’t for the fact that he was told to stay in the bar to build up resistance.
This does remind me of how Midnight was first introduced, wary of lustful situations, and I think this is what I like about Lightendark Midnight the most. His situations can be very funny.
Ok, maybe I take back a bit about what I said in the first point. Though I still will hate on Midnight whenever I see Cerise or anyone else suffer, because he could’ve made some better decisions to avoid that happening. But these funny lustful situations are ok.
(13) Lmao, Eclipsed got completely covered by Redrum thanks to Wispy taking off her clothes so suddenly. And Midnight, instead of shielding Beatrix and Moonlight who were next to him, just decides to cover himself XD. Like maybe he wasn’t able to protect him in time, but that scene was funny.
(14) Eclipsed, Wispy, and Bass scene was fun and sexy. Not much to talk about, but I thought to mention that I like every sex scene you guys make.
And hey, it’s cool that Eclipsed was able to dance. But I do feel sad whenever the chapter mentions that Midnight feels guilty that Cerise isn’t with them.
Again, you guys make me feel so many things in Lightendark, very good job.
(15) For a long moment I was kind of expecting Moonlight’s good time with Moon Hammer to be interrupted by a nightmare from Omen. But at least that didn’t happen.
And well, idk, I guess you guys will decide what will happen to Midnight. At least it’s a bit touching seeing Moonlight begin to think that Midnight could in time prove to be the stallion he was, the stallion he always was before he became a Hyper Stallion and entered Lightendark.
(16) Oh, so Julianne was part of the reapers? That’s interesting. And I like Bellatrix and Shadow talking with each other. I approve of them getting more loads from Zeloph and having them create a new heaven and hell for Lightendark lore lol.
(17) I am becoming as to how their lusts are increasing and how the story keeps mentioning a lustful atmosphere. Maybe I’m worrying too much, but with less dimensions and with She’Ba’s power still the same, the lust is starting to get packed more and more?
Like if She’Ba’s powers came from lust, then maybe the attack from Fiery and the Changelings on Hammerfall, which She’Ba and Omen predicted, was planned to not only inflict losses on the heroes and capture vital pieces, but when the town tries to recover lust becomes a quick and easy solution, keeping She’Ba’s power always up even with all of these dimensions falling?
Like if this is true, by the time that our heroes fight She’Ba and Omen, nightmares and lust levels will be so high that they can barely fight against it?
(18) Ah, for a moment I thought “Beatrix” would kill Shining, but it did turn out to be a fake dream that allowed Vox / Sombra and his forces to get close to the town. Oh and there’s a mist that’s causing lust to increase more? That made those who absorbed it feel more lustful. And it comes from She’Ba?
Huh, maybe I was right to worry.
Bruh, imagine Midnight just walking through the lust mist and nothing happens, or at least have a similar response when Moxxi blew up lustful smoke on him in the Manor
Ok, maybe it is a good thing that they’re training his resistance. He’s going to save the city!
Or maybe get his Hyper form back if he tries to resist the smoke for too long. Idk.
(19) So yeah it is now very clear that they want to turn Fiery into the Burning King, and well Equinox is not having a good day is she?
And I feel bad for Sombra, because he’s a great villain, and Penumbra who’s almost lost. We have to rescue Penumbra!
(20) Bruh, did Sombra really split the army to get both Cerise’s?
“Your mares will make a fine addition to my collection.”
(21) And now Chezka and Panna have joined the team! Yeah, they’ve had enough of Fiery.
(22) But Beatrix feeling her Demiurge becoming more active is worrisome. And oh dear I think Beatrix just saw She’Ba. And of course she’s being led into the mist of lust.
Though She’Ba saying not yet? Does that mean that She’Ba is Oona (like a Future corrupted Oona)? Or will I come to possess Oona soon or manifest like Danse became Mortis and Fiery is going to become Burning King.
(23) She’Ba: You’re nothing but a bacteria The bacterias that have killed millions of people throughout humanity’s age: Am I a joke to you?
(24) Oh, so Beatrix also apparently ticked Omen and that’s why he’s against them? But when? In the future??
(25) Also it's very cool that She’Ba wants to make a new world. And that if Beatrix hadn't been tied to the Necronomicon or become the main character she is, none of this would've happened.
(26) oh, at least She’Ba destroyed the Demiurge.
… And she's trying to knock Beatrix up?
Well at least Iclyn quickly saved her. And with the Demiurge weakened but maybe now thinking it would be best to stick by Beatrix’s side, and with Beatrix's mind made up, maybe things can go well.
Well, as best as she can make it be. The casualties are going to pile up.
(27) I wonder what would happen at the end. We've seen the timeline reset thanks to Enock, and She’Ba and Omen are planning to make a new universe from the ashes of the old, kind of like Thanos. Maybe Beatrix finds herself alone due to the fact that she couldn't save everything in time, but if she managed to beat She’Ba and Omen, or maybe find a way to absorb their power, she can rebuild the universe at the cost of her magic?
Like all of their home worlds are probably screwed, but Beatrix will somehow find a way to return things to normal? Rebuild the universe instead of tearing it down like She’Ba and Omen plan. She becomes a cosmic being.
Like hey, if Oona apparently became one, as did Omen, then surely Beatrix can find a way to do the same. Though imagine if she has to sacrifice herself by letting the Demiurge fully possess her in order to bring back her friends.
And then the Demiurge is chill with her lol and Beatrix can live peacefully afterwards.
(28) Well then, I’m happy that I have been able to read this new chapter, and I can’t wait to see what will happen next! And I will do my best to do my part, ie continue with the Lightendark themes.
Overall a lot has happened in this chapter, I like how Moonlight had sex with Moon Hammer and Dion, the classic Midnight being embarrassed in lustful situations is back, I like how you guys constantly shift my view on him each time, Lightning has her eye back, and She’Ba has declared the end is near! Hope our characters can survive! It was a long wait but it was worth it!
11803783 18. Lol, Midnight saving the day would be funny and fitting!
27. Glad our longest chapter turned out well! Can't comment on She'ba or Omen much as I'm not sure where Nota is headed with them. Probably the chapter with the most clop, too!
11803826 (1) Ah. Still, his decisions caused a lot of damage, but I guess he really did not know how to deal with being a Hyper Stallion until the second strike. Hopefully he doesn’t try and go for a third. :/
(5) But I guess it does make sense if we factor in the mist of lust, or maybe Zeloph gained infinite rizz after becoming the Aether King. Everyone is filled with lust, everyone except Midnight who they put a sex ban on XD
(6) Yeah I know, she’s a spirit. Still, Future Aba does count as another one, but Zeloph was unaware of her existence.
(7) Yeah, good thing Zeloph is here. I’m happy that Lightning got her eye back! But maybe she still would feel some shadow pain, even if her eye is back in place. She did after all have to regrow the eye, but it’ll be ok.
(8) I forgot why Chisana is in a child form, I think Nota explained but I don’t remember where that would be.
(13) Lmao. Midnight be like “You guys were the ones who are teasing me, I ain’t saving ya”
(18) The Hyper Stallion will ironically be the only one immune to the mist.
Like we already know the reason Moxxi’s smoke didn’t affect him was because Midnight’s mind was pure, but now thinking about it, even if Midnight’s mind was pure he still should’ve been affected by her smoke.
I think I can tie the She’Ba Hyper Stallion theory here. Considering how her magic makes everyone get completely dominated by lust and pushes them to insanity, we can assume that Hyper Stallions were created by She’Ba to propagate lust and create this mythical legend of stallions with no equal.
Going on a small tangent, imagine if She’Ba and Omen had already planned to create the Hyper Stallion lore (or corrupt a preexisting one, after all every other Midnight does not have a half life) so that when Beatrix eventually met and then wished Midnight to be her half brother, Midnight would eventually cause so many issues that it would be one of the major reasons why Beatrix took so long to choose where to go. That probably didn’t happen, but if it did then that would really blow my mind.
But anyways, considering how self destructive Hyper Stallions are, then we can categorize them as insane(ly) lustful, the type that She’Ba’s magic can cause. Thus even though Moxxi smoked Midnight with lust, it had no effect on him because he’s already one of the most lustful creatures in existence. It takes the Twins a long time to force that lustful side out of him and once they do he immediately goes on the attack, trying to pin down and fuck Shadow who could’ve instantly killed him had things gone her way. And yet not only was he pinning him down, we see him constantly keep up with those who should be leagues above him.
Now that Midnight has realized just how destructive his lustful lifestyle has been and is trying to avoid giving in to lust, as long as he keeps doing what he’s doing, he might be able to hold onto his sanity long enough to prevent others from doing the same mistakes he’s doing. Like Zeloph and Eclipsed almost fucked for no real reason, and everyone is constantly having more and more sex. Considering how Vox / Sombra are planning to attack soon, I wouldn’t be surprised that forcing their enemy to let their guard down through sex was their plan, but they’ll be surprised that Midnight is still kicking.
It might’ve been a good thing that Sombra split his forces, if the tidal wave of lust is coming to his Hammerfall I think the only ones who would be fighting initially would be Midnight (if he’s able to resist), Iclyn (who has no problem walking through the mist to help Beatrix), Julianne (who’s a nun and a Exhalted Demi Human), and maybe Seb and Arron.
I don’t know what direction the next chapter will actually take, but it would be cool if Midnight resisted the mist because he was a Hyper Stallion. How long though depends, because we know that he became a Hyper Stallion after trying to resist his lust for too long under so much pressure, and he might do it again.
But if he does then he’ll just be a true Super Soldier. Onoma + Hyper Stallion Power would be so powerful!
Would Sombra have split Thunder and Snowy (who are his armored soldiers), or will both of them attack Fiery and cause him to become the Burning King? It would be interesting seeing Thunder versus Midnight, because Thunder himself had a last stand against the changelings, and in a way his “son that would’ve been his son had Beatrix not interfered” would also be making a stand (if he did not cave to lust)
Or maybe he does cave into lust really quickly and attacks as a Hyper Stallion again, but with Iclyn around I think one punch would be enough to knock some sense back into Midnight. Especially if Midnight was about to commit his third and final strike.
Idk we’ll see.
(27) Hmhmm, can’t wait to see what Nota says about them, if he’ll say anything. Future Oona = She’Ba Theory Confirmed???
Like we know She’Ba has always existed, but maybe like Danse manifested into Death and they plan to manifest Fiery into Burning King, Omen will manifest Oona into She’Ba.
Maybe there’s been multiple loops, and we’re seeing the final loop where victory seemingly is assured for Omen and She’Ba
11803882 Ah, they'll definitely trigger Fiery, Sombra doesn't even need to be there lol.
Meanwhile...
"Look at you, the Hyper Stallion, though unfortunately it looks like you lost that power already. I must say, you are in every single way not worthy of Cerise. Fact is, I'm not just only close enough to fully assimilating myself into your brother in law, but I knocked your wife up too! Who knows, she might come with twins~"
11803890 Or maybe he should've stayed innocent? Idk, but I wouldn't be surprised if Sombra came to Hammerfall, beat down Midnight, causing him to slip into the mist's control, only to reveal this information to Midnight, causing Midnight to enrage himself and use the power of a Hyper Stallion and Onoma combined (or an enraged Onoma is equally effective).
Like, Eclipsed being in Hammerfall is the perfect opportunity for Sombra to get two of his favorite mares, but it's also a perfect opportunity for Midnight to knock down Sombra and free his brother in law before he's lost forever. And who knows, maybe Shining might help as well. They both deserve to redeem themselves with this battle, especially if everyone else is caving into their lusts. Shining is after all a Hyper Stallion as well, so if my theory about She'Ba, Hyper Stallions, and immunity to lust smoke is correct, they both should be ready to fight.
nice work still! and that's why i mostly write offline in Word, less trouble with that
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Unfortunately, I only have internet on my phone so not much choice.
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oh..i see. me, i just dislike the lack of word count in g doc and how it screws up paragraphs at times
Sorry that Google Docs forced you to rewrite everything, but glad that Lightendark is back!
(1) Oh yeah, Cerise had that happen last time we saw her. And now she definitely has a foal from Sombra. Idk if this foal will be one of the two that are part of the Future timeline, don’t know how closely the Future followed the Present events, but I wonder if Midnight and Cerise will even stay together after this. Cause realistically this is a bit too much she has to go through.
Like every single time we go back and see Cerise suffer more, it kind of makes me want to see Midnight die more.
Don’t mistake this as me hating on Lightendark or on how you guys changed him. I love how much you guys make me think and feel. I’m just saying that Midnight’s actions have done a ton of damage to characters I’ve come to love. Like I can’t say he doesn’t deserve a happy ending, Zeloph and Shadow caused millions of deaths and yet Shadow’s own demise and Zeloph’s distraught hit me in the heart, and seeing them reunited was so touching. But their bad history feels distant now and they had arcs stretching across multiple stories. Midnight’s actions made everyone I like either suffer pain (Cerise, Moonlight, Penumbra) or turn everyone against him (Moxxi, Dion, Iclyn, etc). And that’s something that ain’t going to go away.
I keep forgetting that he’s still 18 and with the Hyper Stallion trait that causes lust to be the only answer, so yeah it was a freight train that was bound to collide, but the first time was a tragedy for both Midnight and Cerise as Midnight was forced by Doppia. This time it was a tragedy that Midnight caused himself, even if the others should’ve realized that making Midnight constantly enter his Hyper form and depend on lust for survival was something they should try and avoid.
Once Lightendark ends I might try and reread Lightendark from the Manor and see what my opinions of Midnight are once his arc is over. Maybe then I can forgive him lol XD
(2) Do have to say though, while the scenes that Cerise has to deal with are definitely bad for her, they are also incredibly hot. Chrysalis basically got what she wanted and her playing with Cerise, very well written!
Still feel bad for Cerise, especially since each time she sleeps she’ll get more nightmares from Omen (and as we’ve seen, Omen can also attack in the day as well). But hey, at least she managed to trade her ass for some more protection for the changelings.
Also feel bad that Trixie, Beatrix’s mom, is corrupted, but I mean, she also prevented Penumbra from breaking out from Sombra’s hold, though I think Vox already was in his mouth by then, so idk if things would’ve changed.
(3) Happy that Zeloph is tired for the right reasons, ie fucking his two girlfriends at the same time (literally), as well as eliminating the guy that took Shadow away in the first place. He’s no longer the Sigma Male he described himself in Lightendark: Search for Abadonna. He’s now an Alpha male! Would say Gigachad personality as well. XD
(4) Yeah, I’m also surprised how Midnight’s world is still surviving, I guess because it’s kind of a super dimension from all the other worlds being connected to it? And then when the time comes right, it’ll collapse leaving the entire multiverse empty. Forever…
(5) Dafuq??? *Visible confusion*
Yeah, that was a bit weird seeing Zeloph and Eclipsed almost begin to have sex. I'm blaming She’Ba and I wouldn't be surprised if this is starting to happen to others. Kind of how Omen is attacking with nightmares, She’Ba could try the same thing?
It would be very ironic if everyone but Midnight is getting into a frenzy lust.
Or maybe what just happened is a Demi Human thing, especially since Zeloph got extremely laid. Maybe part of the equation that had Lucifer and Layla bond back when they first met?
Or maybe since he's now the Aether King he has more properties? Idk, but I want to see why this happened. Interesting plot point here.
(6) Zeloph and Eclipsed are now unofficial diplomats between the Cyberverse and the Demi Humans lol. Love how he realized that the number of Demi Humans have now grown lol. And technically there's more, Future Aba. Demi Trix “was” a Demi Human technically? RIP Mini Trix.
(7)(7) Zeloph completely healed Lightning’s eye! That’s incredible!
Wait, then why would She’Ba and Omen go through the effort of giving Lightning’s statue an eyepatch? Does it automatically update itself? Or they’re not as omnipotent of all the outcomes as I thought they were?
(8) Lol, Chisana trying to see what Kyube and Kitsune are doing. Though I think many chapters before Kyube explained that Chisana simply took on the form of a child and that they’re actually older? But trying to translate the japanese to english text says “How many times do I have to say that I am a child?” which doesn’t make sense to what Eclipsed said.
(9) Don’t have much to comment about Zeloph explaining things to Seb and Arron, but hey at least Eclipsed has fully decided to stay for Cerise.
(10) Oh yeah, Moxxi said she’d help keep the bar open in the last chapter. Wow, it feels so long ago though. And given how many are sleeping and most of the bovines are having shaky legs, Moxxi and Wispy must’ve done a fantastic job!
(11) And again, Moon Hammer x Moonlight x Marathyssa was so good! I think it is definitely a top sex scene from Lightendark, if not number one!
(12) Yeah, Moonlight’s drunk. I find it humorous that sexy situations are still being thrown at Midnight despite everything that’s happened. Maybe Eclipsed was right with saying that Beatrix keeps stumbling upon sex-charged universes. Beatrix be having a Dragon Ball Radar for that.
I found it funny how Beatrix is holding Midnight in between her tits lol while talking to Eclipsed. Like Midnight probably just wants to leave if it weren’t for the fact that he was told to stay in the bar to build up resistance.
This does remind me of how Midnight was first introduced, wary of lustful situations, and I think this is what I like about Lightendark Midnight the most. His situations can be very funny.
Ok, maybe I take back a bit about what I said in the first point. Though I still will hate on Midnight whenever I see Cerise or anyone else suffer, because he could’ve made some better decisions to avoid that happening. But these funny lustful situations are ok.
(13) Lmao, Eclipsed got completely covered by Redrum thanks to Wispy taking off her clothes so suddenly. And Midnight, instead of shielding Beatrix and Moonlight who were next to him, just decides to cover himself XD. Like maybe he wasn’t able to protect him in time, but that scene was funny.
(14) Eclipsed, Wispy, and Bass scene was fun and sexy. Not much to talk about, but I thought to mention that I like every sex scene you guys make.
And hey, it’s cool that Eclipsed was able to dance. But I do feel sad whenever the chapter mentions that Midnight feels guilty that Cerise isn’t with them.
Again, you guys make me feel so many things in Lightendark, very good job.
(15) For a long moment I was kind of expecting Moonlight’s good time with Moon Hammer to be interrupted by a nightmare from Omen. But at least that didn’t happen.
And well, idk, I guess you guys will decide what will happen to Midnight. At least it’s a bit touching seeing Moonlight begin to think that Midnight could in time prove to be the stallion he was, the stallion he always was before he became a Hyper Stallion and entered Lightendark.
(16) Oh, so Julianne was part of the reapers? That’s interesting. And I like Bellatrix and Shadow talking with each other. I approve of them getting more loads from Zeloph and having them create a new heaven and hell for Lightendark lore lol.
(17) I am becoming as to how their lusts are increasing and how the story keeps mentioning a lustful atmosphere. Maybe I’m worrying too much, but with less dimensions and with She’Ba’s power still the same, the lust is starting to get packed more and more?
Like if She’Ba’s powers came from lust, then maybe the attack from Fiery and the Changelings on Hammerfall, which She’Ba and Omen predicted, was planned to not only inflict losses on the heroes and capture vital pieces, but when the town tries to recover lust becomes a quick and easy solution, keeping She’Ba’s power always up even with all of these dimensions falling?
Like if this is true, by the time that our heroes fight She’Ba and Omen, nightmares and lust levels will be so high that they can barely fight against it?
(18) Ah, for a moment I thought “Beatrix” would kill Shining, but it did turn out to be a fake dream that allowed Vox / Sombra and his forces to get close to the town. Oh and there’s a mist that’s causing lust to increase more? That made those who absorbed it feel more lustful. And it comes from She’Ba?
Huh, maybe I was right to worry.
Bruh, imagine Midnight just walking through the lust mist and nothing happens, or at least have a similar response when Moxxi blew up lustful smoke on him in the Manor
Ok, maybe it is a good thing that they’re training his resistance. He’s going to save the city!
Or maybe get his Hyper form back if he tries to resist the smoke for too long. Idk.
(19) So yeah it is now very clear that they want to turn Fiery into the Burning King, and well Equinox is not having a good day is she?
And I feel bad for Sombra, because he’s a great villain, and Penumbra who’s almost lost. We have to rescue Penumbra!
(20) Bruh, did Sombra really split the army to get both Cerise’s?
“Your mares will make a fine addition to my collection.”
(21) And now Chezka and Panna have joined the team! Yeah, they’ve had enough of Fiery.
(22) But Beatrix feeling her Demiurge becoming more active is worrisome. And oh dear I think Beatrix just saw She’Ba. And of course she’s being led into the mist of lust.
Though She’Ba saying not yet? Does that mean that She’Ba is Oona (like a Future corrupted Oona)? Or will I come to possess Oona soon or manifest like Danse became Mortis and Fiery is going to become Burning King.
(23) She’Ba: You’re nothing but a bacteria
The bacterias that have killed millions of people throughout humanity’s age: Am I a joke to you?
(24) Oh, so Beatrix also apparently ticked Omen and that’s why he’s against them? But when? In the future??
(25) Also it's very cool that She’Ba wants to make a new world. And that if Beatrix hadn't been tied to the Necronomicon or become the main character she is, none of this would've happened.
(26) oh, at least She’Ba destroyed the Demiurge.
… And she's trying to knock Beatrix up?
Well at least Iclyn quickly saved her. And with the Demiurge weakened but maybe now thinking it would be best to stick by Beatrix’s side, and with Beatrix's mind made up, maybe things can go well.
Well, as best as she can make it be. The casualties are going to pile up.
(27) I wonder what would happen at the end. We've seen the timeline reset thanks to Enock, and She’Ba and Omen are planning to make a new universe from the ashes of the old, kind of like Thanos. Maybe Beatrix finds herself alone due to the fact that she couldn't save everything in time, but if she managed to beat She’Ba and Omen, or maybe find a way to absorb their power, she can rebuild the universe at the cost of her magic?
Like all of their home worlds are probably screwed, but Beatrix will somehow find a way to return things to normal? Rebuild the universe instead of tearing it down like She’Ba and Omen plan. She becomes a cosmic being.
Like hey, if Oona apparently became one, as did Omen, then surely Beatrix can find a way to do the same. Though imagine if she has to sacrifice herself by letting the Demiurge fully possess her in order to bring back her friends.
And then the Demiurge is chill with her lol and Beatrix can live peacefully afterwards.
(28) Well then, I’m happy that I have been able to read this new chapter, and I can’t wait to see what will happen next! And I will do my best to do my part, ie continue with the Lightendark themes.
Overall a lot has happened in this chapter, I like how Moonlight had sex with Moon Hammer and Dion, the classic Midnight being embarrassed in lustful situations is back, I like how you guys constantly shift my view on him each time, Lightning has her eye back, and She’Ba has declared the end is near! Hope our characters can survive! It was a long wait but it was worth it!
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1. Midnight is in his early 20s I think? It's listed in character trope page, but yes, he does act young due to his life experiences.
5. Surprised me too, a potential pairing I never would have expected even with the unusual circumstances!
6. According to Nota, Demi-Trix doesn't count as a true demihuman.
7. Nota came up with both scenes, originally Lightning permanently lost her eye in my script. Zell is apparently a powerful healer!
8. Yeah, according to Nota Chisana is an adult.
13. Midnight reacted on instinct, he probably assumed Bea wanted the shot!
I'll go over the rest soon, thanks for commenting!
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18. Lol, Midnight saving the day would be funny and fitting!
27. Glad our longest chapter turned out well! Can't comment on She'ba or Omen much as I'm not sure where Nota is headed with them. Probably the chapter with the most clop, too!
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(1) Ah. Still, his decisions caused a lot of damage, but I guess he really did not know how to deal with being a Hyper Stallion until the second strike. Hopefully he doesn’t try and go for a third. :/
(5) But I guess it does make sense if we factor in the mist of lust, or maybe Zeloph gained infinite rizz after becoming the Aether King. Everyone is filled with lust, everyone except Midnight who they put a sex ban on XD
(6) Yeah I know, she’s a spirit. Still, Future Aba does count as another one, but Zeloph was unaware of her existence.
(7) Yeah, good thing Zeloph is here. I’m happy that Lightning got her eye back! But maybe she still would feel some shadow pain, even if her eye is back in place. She did after all have to regrow the eye, but it’ll be ok.
(8) I forgot why Chisana is in a child form, I think Nota explained but I don’t remember where that would be.
(13) Lmao. Midnight be like “You guys were the ones who are teasing me, I ain’t saving ya”
(18) The Hyper Stallion will ironically be the only one immune to the mist.
Like we already know the reason Moxxi’s smoke didn’t affect him was because Midnight’s mind was pure, but now thinking about it, even if Midnight’s mind was pure he still should’ve been affected by her smoke.
I think I can tie the She’Ba Hyper Stallion theory here. Considering how her magic makes everyone get completely dominated by lust and pushes them to insanity, we can assume that Hyper Stallions were created by She’Ba to propagate lust and create this mythical legend of stallions with no equal.
Going on a small tangent, imagine if She’Ba and Omen had already planned to create the Hyper Stallion lore (or corrupt a preexisting one, after all every other Midnight does not have a half life) so that when Beatrix eventually met and then wished Midnight to be her half brother, Midnight would eventually cause so many issues that it would be one of the major reasons why Beatrix took so long to choose where to go. That probably didn’t happen, but if it did then that would really blow my mind.
But anyways, considering how self destructive Hyper Stallions are, then we can categorize them as insane(ly) lustful, the type that She’Ba’s magic can cause. Thus even though Moxxi smoked Midnight with lust, it had no effect on him because he’s already one of the most lustful creatures in existence. It takes the Twins a long time to force that lustful side out of him and once they do he immediately goes on the attack, trying to pin down and fuck Shadow who could’ve instantly killed him had things gone her way. And yet not only was he pinning him down, we see him constantly keep up with those who should be leagues above him.
Now that Midnight has realized just how destructive his lustful lifestyle has been and is trying to avoid giving in to lust, as long as he keeps doing what he’s doing, he might be able to hold onto his sanity long enough to prevent others from doing the same mistakes he’s doing. Like Zeloph and Eclipsed almost fucked for no real reason, and everyone is constantly having more and more sex. Considering how Vox / Sombra are planning to attack soon, I wouldn’t be surprised that forcing their enemy to let their guard down through sex was their plan, but they’ll be surprised that Midnight is still kicking.
It might’ve been a good thing that Sombra split his forces, if the tidal wave of lust is coming to his Hammerfall I think the only ones who would be fighting initially would be Midnight (if he’s able to resist), Iclyn (who has no problem walking through the mist to help Beatrix), Julianne (who’s a nun and a Exhalted Demi Human), and maybe Seb and Arron.
I don’t know what direction the next chapter will actually take, but it would be cool if Midnight resisted the mist because he was a Hyper Stallion. How long though depends, because we know that he became a Hyper Stallion after trying to resist his lust for too long under so much pressure, and he might do it again.
But if he does then he’ll just be a true Super Soldier. Onoma + Hyper Stallion Power would be so powerful!
Would Sombra have split Thunder and Snowy (who are his armored soldiers), or will both of them attack Fiery and cause him to become the Burning King? It would be interesting seeing Thunder versus Midnight, because Thunder himself had a last stand against the changelings, and in a way his “son that would’ve been his son had Beatrix not interfered” would also be making a stand (if he did not cave to lust)
Or maybe he does cave into lust really quickly and attacks as a Hyper Stallion again, but with Iclyn around I think one punch would be enough to knock some sense back into Midnight. Especially if Midnight was about to commit his third and final strike.
Idk we’ll see.
(27) Hmhmm, can’t wait to see what Nota says about them, if he’ll say anything. Future Oona = She’Ba Theory Confirmed???
Like we know She’Ba has always existed, but maybe like Danse manifested into Death and they plan to manifest Fiery into Burning King, Omen will manifest Oona into She’Ba.
Maybe there’s been multiple loops, and we’re seeing the final loop where victory seemingly is assured for Omen and She’Ba
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Thunder and Snowy will be in the same team, Sombra is targeting Hammerfall himself.
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Ah, they'll definitely trigger Fiery, Sombra doesn't even need to be there lol.
Meanwhile...
"Look at you, the Hyper Stallion, though unfortunately it looks like you lost that power already. I must say, you are in every single way not worthy of Cerise. Fact is, I'm not just only close enough to fully assimilating myself into your brother in law, but I knocked your wife up too! Who knows, she might come with twins~"
Midnight:
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Poor Midnight! Yep, his life sucks when he's not banging mares.
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Or maybe he should've stayed innocent? Idk, but I wouldn't be surprised if Sombra came to Hammerfall, beat down Midnight, causing him to slip into the mist's control, only to reveal this information to Midnight, causing Midnight to enrage himself and use the power of a Hyper Stallion and Onoma combined (or an enraged Onoma is equally effective).
Like, Eclipsed being in Hammerfall is the perfect opportunity for Sombra to get two of his favorite mares, but it's also a perfect opportunity for Midnight to knock down Sombra and free his brother in law before he's lost forever. And who knows, maybe Shining might help as well. They both deserve to redeem themselves with this battle, especially if everyone else is caving into their lusts. Shining is after all a Hyper Stallion as well, so if my theory about She'Ba, Hyper Stallions, and immunity to lust smoke is correct, they both should be ready to fight.
But man, Midnight is going to be pissed.
Beatrix is going to have to go full Nun to survive Shub Niggurath
Beatrix: "Hentai Shub-Niggurath isn't real. She can't hurt me."
Hentai Shub-Niggurath:
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Ane Naru Mono: The Sister of the Woods with a Thousand Young
Written and illustrated by this woman.
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Maybe she can take lessons from Julianne?
Really looking forward to the next chapter, which should move the story forward significantly!
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Remind me to look up where I can read this. For research purposes, of course 👀