(1) Hmmm, who would actually win between Moon Hammer and Fiery? I do like Moon's line where he says Fiery would be scattered in pieces everywhere.
(2) Hmm, Fiery sure is getting angry. If he continues down his path and loses more and more control, he might indeed become consumed by rage!
He is starting to sound a lot like the previous Burning King. That one did burn a lot of stuff with no regard towards life.
(3) I like the name of Hammerfall. Very cool!
(4) now we follow Beatrix! Yeah it would've been nice that she was allowed to explore to her heart's content, but unfortunately she's so overloaded with so many concerns about old and new threats.
So many things to manage, every time she tries to help something worst takes it place. Every decision destroys one of her friend's lives.
Yeah it's rough for Beatrix.
(5) Yeah, too bad that Arcanum's portal meant nothing in the end. Maybe someone from Midnight's world can use it? Oh no, what if the villains enter Oona's world. All the villains congregating in that dimension would be a disaster!
Or perhaps a friend or at least temporary ally can go through and help. His portal can still be relevant.
(6) Yeah, it's safe to say everyone had it rough. Moonlight had to go through a lot of shame and disappointment in this story.
I hope that she eventually finds her good ending in the future. She deserves peace like everyone. Unfortunately, a sequel to this story probably will exist so that might not happen for another long while. Oof.
(7) It's pretty cool seeing the story from Beatrix's team POV in comparison to Zeloph's.
And what lines are same like the description of Sacratera.
So if the planet did have oxygen, but it's contaminated, then it's not pure oxygen? Or maybe it is but it becomes flammable or makes a really bad reaction with the body once time passes.
(8) Yeah more parts are similar, so not much to talk about here I guess. Actually the entirety of the story after the two are linked are the same right?
Huh, it's pretty rare when I comment more on UaR than PoW. I like that!
Both stories were great reads! So what will happen next? They'll both be similar from now on? one of the stories carry the main plot and the other contain the side things??? What will happen.
11564070 1. I'd give the edge to Fiery, due to flight and his Onoma, plus he's formally trained. Moon Hammer is physically stronger/more durable though.
11564251 Like in all cases tends to depend on circumstance. Say, Beatrix could easily shoot him down from a distance but Fiery might close the gap in time and cut her down. Fiery is quite tough!
“What bollocks are you on about? This ‘Glamorguis’ is a living marvel,” praised Arcanum Folklore, who rapped his knuckles on a wall with a whistle. “Haven’t been on a ship that can sail this fast and elegantly! Space travel like this should take many lifetimes!” The warlock took it all in. Like Beatrix, he distracted himself from his own troubles, his focus on Bloody Merry...and the disappearance of the Necronomicon. “If I had to nitpick, it’s that me bloody teleportation spell was rendered obsolete. All that bloody hard work, trouble, and effort for nothing!”
Little does Arcanum realize yet that with enough math and engineers his Teleportation can unlock Interdimensional and Faster than Light Travel for large Spacecrafts some fifty years from now.
“Bloody hell,” murmured Arcanum, observing Viscera with a disgruntled look. “I’ve seen some butt-ugly aliens in me life. But this overcooked turkey takes the case!”
“You’re not exactly easy on the eyes either, Folklore,” the fiendish avian said with a knowing grin. “Grizzled private film noir dick? Bloody Merry must've been a dame with shallow standards~.”
The drop of her name caused the erenn stallion to bash his fist against the glass, his glare sharp enough to pierce through one’s soul. He uttered with cold fury, “How the fuck do you know that?!”
“Your guess is as good as mine,” muttered Zeloph, matching with a narrow stare. “For someone who was only born moments ago, you know quite a lot.”
Viscera tittered. “I have a knack for reading people’s hearts. A talent, really. Call it my witch’s intuition!”
Last I checked Vicera the Canterlot Castle Maids, the Garden Guard, Luna, Titania, and Fleur de Lis want to have every available orifice stuffed with enough of his cum to look like they all individually where gangbanged into submission and made to look like a some sort of hentai sex massacre. pbs.twimg.com/media/FuiXV_1WYAED4KM?format=jpg&name=medium
Arcanum knelt to scoop up the Necronomicon, proclaiming, “I’ll hold onto this until we’ve made an official decision. While Zeloph had no right to take immediate action, It’s hard to say he isn’t justified. This thing needs to be burned. So that no one else may be tempted to use it…”
But the warlock could tell it had already worked its temptations on Beatrix, convincing her she needed it. Just to preserve its ruinous existence.
If only the Black Hole plan would work.
Anyway the fact that Vicera that took enough threat of the Kurdish Dager to accept capture suprised me. The Hyborean Blade is far mor understandable a threat to something like her.
Secretera was Earth wasn't it? It probably went through a Devilman style Apocalypse followed by a Mi-Go invasion. Making it all become like the weird aftermath of Area X.
11566884 Correct. Sacratera is a post-apocalyptic earth and very much ended like Devilman Crybaby. But my inspirations were basically “what if the shimmer from ‘Annihilation’ took hold of the entire planet?”
11567291 The Gardens Guard are more of a Platoon consisting of 42 mares, than an army. Allowed firearms despite the servile uniforms they are seen as Combatants, unlike the Royal Guards who are just Military Police. The Garden Guard are Celestia's personal hit squad. They are the Royal Pony Sisters second closest servants next to their Knights and Personal Assistants. They serve as the Eyes, Ears, and Swords. Though they are more often than not assigned to Parliament members as guards but also their potential executioners if they ever betray Equestria's best interests. They are also assigned to be servants to Knights upon orders from the Royal Pony Sisters to serve as assistants.
Folklore, Shinning Armor, and Dotted Line are three notable stallions with the given tittle of Sir and as such are Knights to Luna, Cadence, and Celestia respectively.
11567392 Interesting, reminds me of Shining Armor, Fiery Kickstart, and Thunder Storm here being the knights to Princess Cadance before it all went to hell!
Time to read PoW!
(1) Hmmm, who would actually win between Moon Hammer and Fiery? I do like Moon's line where he says Fiery would be scattered in pieces everywhere.
(2) Hmm, Fiery sure is getting angry. If he continues down his path and loses more and more control, he might indeed become consumed by rage!
He is starting to sound a lot like the previous Burning King. That one did burn a lot of stuff with no regard towards life.
(3) I like the name of Hammerfall. Very cool!
(4) now we follow Beatrix! Yeah it would've been nice that she was allowed to explore to her heart's content, but unfortunately she's so overloaded with so many concerns about old and new threats.
So many things to manage, every time she tries to help something worst takes it place. Every decision destroys one of her friend's lives.
Yeah it's rough for Beatrix.
(5) Yeah, too bad that Arcanum's portal meant nothing in the end. Maybe someone from Midnight's world can use it? Oh no, what if the villains enter Oona's world. All the villains congregating in that dimension would be a disaster!
Or perhaps a friend or at least temporary ally can go through and help. His portal can still be relevant.
(6) Yeah, it's safe to say everyone had it rough. Moonlight had to go through a lot of shame and disappointment in this story.
I hope that she eventually finds her good ending in the future. She deserves peace like everyone. Unfortunately, a sequel to this story probably will exist so that might not happen for another long while. Oof.
(7) It's pretty cool seeing the story from Beatrix's team POV in comparison to Zeloph's.
And what lines are same like the description of Sacratera.
So if the planet did have oxygen, but it's contaminated, then it's not pure oxygen? Or maybe it is but it becomes flammable or makes a really bad reaction with the body once time passes.
(8) Yeah more parts are similar, so not much to talk about here I guess. Actually the entirety of the story after the two are linked are the same right?
Huh, it's pretty rare when I comment more on UaR than PoW. I like that!
Both stories were great reads! So what will happen next? They'll both be similar from now on? one of the stories carry the main plot and the other contain the side things??? What will happen.
Hmmm…
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1. I'd give the edge to Fiery, due to flight and his Onoma, plus he's formally trained. Moon Hammer is physically stronger/more durable though.
5. Keep the portal in the back of your mind...
that was unexpected, would explain the simultaneous upload. Was it good I read this first, or should I have read the other one first?
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1. Cool.
Hmm, what opponents would Fiery currently be unable to defeat? What is his limitations?
5. Alright will do!
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Notaponyperson says it's up to preference, I usually suggest reading UaR first.
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Like in all cases tends to depend on circumstance. Say, Beatrix could easily shoot him down from a distance but Fiery might close the gap in time and cut her down. Fiery is quite tough!
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Okay
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Hmmm
How would Lightning fair?
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Probably similar to Beatrix, except Lightning lacks Beatrix's experience and skill?
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Hmmm.
Who would Fiery outright lose to?
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Hard to say, Zeloph? Dion?
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Everyone currently above Beatrix's tier? Like Omen?
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Probably? Skill and wit can sometimes overcome power.
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Hmhmm
Little does Arcanum realize yet that with enough math and engineers his Teleportation can unlock Interdimensional and Faster than Light Travel for large Spacecrafts some fifty years from now.
Last I checked Vicera the Canterlot Castle Maids, the Garden Guard, Luna, Titania, and Fleur de Lis want to have every available orifice stuffed with enough of his cum to look like they all individually where gangbanged into submission and made to look like a some sort of hentai sex massacre.
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If only the Black Hole plan would work.
Anyway the fact that Vicera that took enough threat of the Kurdish Dager to accept capture suprised me. The Hyborean Blade is far mor understandable a threat to something like her.
Secretera was Earth wasn't it? It probably went through a Devilman style Apocalypse followed by a Mi-Go invasion. Making it all become like the weird aftermath of Area X.
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Maybe Arcanum will get lucky here eventually...he's certainly had some opportunities!
11566884
Correct. Sacratera is a post-apocalyptic earth and very much ended like Devilman Crybaby. But my inspirations were basically “what if the shimmer from ‘Annihilation’ took hold of the entire planet?”
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Basically the Garden Guard
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The Garden Guard are the armed serving maids of the Canterlot Castle Garders. They aren't ceremonial, these ladies can and will kill.
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Esmeralda and Camellia had an army like that, although they were clockwork marionettes!
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The Gardens Guard are more of a Platoon consisting of 42 mares, than an army. Allowed firearms despite the servile uniforms they are seen as Combatants, unlike the Royal Guards who are just Military Police. The Garden Guard are Celestia's personal hit squad. They are the Royal Pony Sisters second closest servants next to their Knights and Personal Assistants. They serve as the Eyes, Ears, and Swords. Though they are more often than not assigned to Parliament members as guards but also their potential executioners if they ever betray Equestria's best interests. They are also assigned to be servants to Knights upon orders from the Royal Pony Sisters to serve as assistants.
Folklore, Shinning Armor, and Dotted Line are three notable stallions with the given tittle of Sir and as such are Knights to Luna, Cadence, and Celestia respectively.
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Interesting, reminds me of Shining Armor, Fiery Kickstart, and Thunder Storm here being the knights to Princess Cadance before it all went to hell!
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Concept belongs to a Japanese artist, but I adepted it for my own use. I feel like I am going to get sued. Hoping for a manga soon though.
@asterisk_kome
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I can't say no to battle maids!