11242140 Well for one, seeing the three headed dragon getting ready to fuck Bea, Icyln, and Midnight reminded me a lot of War vs Shining! Ngl I kind of expected something to happen *blushes* XD
Is this dragon bigger than Midnight though? Proportion wise I think Midnight probably has him beat, but would he be bigger than Midnight? Idk, but either ways I don't think Midnight would've liked to experience that without any preparation XD
I'm surprised Icyln's a boy. Like Beatrix said before, it's not gender that's the problem, how Iclyn acts. Hopefully things will improve.
I'm excited to see what will happen to Lightning Spark. Damn, Snowy Blizzard got wrecked though. I wonder how Lightning Spark will react to hear that Thunder Storm wasn't her father, instead it was Shining Armor. So much guilt must be within Snowy.
I'm not surprised that Lightning Spark doesn't have as shapely assets. In fact, I was kind of expecting her to be flat all around, given that she probably wouldn't have been fed very well, much of her muscles must be very weakened and to the point of almost not functioning at all. They need to prevent prisoners from escaping right? In fat I wouldn't be surprised if one could see her bones.
I imagine that mares like Snowy would be properly fed only for the sake that they would survive pregnancy and be bred again. And well, if they're pregnant to the point where they're massively swollen, they probably wouldn't be able to escape even if they were freed and given a headstart. Poor Snowy! She must've been broken in so many times!
I wonder if Lightning Spark's body could recover and gain some mass. Again, considering that she had little to no mobility ever since she was captured when she was young, I'm surprised she could even walk and fly. Or be athletic. Thankfully she's determined to free herself and turn things around! Maybe after time passes she'll develop a better body, because again, I wouldn't be surprised that Lightning was all bones and little to no fat right now.
I wonder what the family heirloom is! I can't wait to see if this has any secrets!
11242182 Actually, I figure the changelings would keep the mares well-fed, simply to make them better breeding material. Lightning Spark is naturally more on the lean side, but she has fluffy fur like Midnight.
11242205 Well, I assume Lightning hasn't been bred yet as otherwise, she would've been like her mother. The changelings probably wouldn't give her any room to breathe once they began their process with her.
But I still imagine that mares who were already being bred would have 'top priority' food, leaving Lightning to be on the border of starvation. She'd get her full meals after she gets bred. Like, that would be an effective manner to get more willing subjects. As willing as it could be.
I doubt Lightning would get her exercise to be athletic. And wouldn't the changelings prefer to have very juicy mares that can make breeding easier? Thus that's why I say that until Lightning gets bred, she isn't given as much food. Just enough to let her live another day. That's just my opinion.
11242212 I'm thinking they would try and tempt her with food in exchange for sex, but Lightning would resist, realizing they are trying to break down her resilience. They would also wait to breed mares until they're most fertile, fortunately for her!
11242212 I'm thinking they would try and tempt her with food in exchange for sex, but Lightning would resist, realizing they are trying to break down her resilience. They would also wait to breed mares until they're most fertile, fortunately for her!
11242216 Yeah, that was my thinking. This is why Lightning wouldn't be as supple as she could've. She's flat basically. And yeah, it's a good thing that Lightning isn't at her fertile point. It's sad that Snowy Blizzard has been knocked up so many times. But at least Lightning Spark can perhaps give the team the changelings location so that when the war reactivates, they know where to strike.
I would find it very ironic that had Lightning gotten her meals or wasn't under changeling subjugation, she might've been very curvy. She wanted to be a Wonderbolt (which would be a military unit but still dedicated to flying), not a soldier persay. "Dang it! Make me more aerodynamic!" "... but curves are aerodynamic...?" "GRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR"
11242223 Still, I would find it very ironic that after recovering from such poor conditions she's bigger than say Moonlight, who's in between B and C I imagine. Heck, it'd be even funnier if she was a D cup in the future, in between Cerise and Beatrix. Moonlight: "Hey! How come you're bigger than me!?" Lightning: "I know right! Stupid anti-aerodynamic assets..."
Lightning has not been fed properly, as a tactic to make her cave into the Changeling's desires. So it wouldn't be surprising that after getting some mass her body forms like this. Wouldn't be surprised that their parents genes could make her curvy despite Lightning wanting to be athletic.
11242227 I meant his *cough* *cough* trident *cough* *cough*, but I guess that also gives an idea. Alright, I'll keep that in mind when addressing Icyln.
11242247 Yeah. Which is good for Lightning! I don't think any sane mare would trade their freedom for curviness. Poor Snowy though, she's getting absolutely wrecked. Hopefully she can survive!
I never wondered what their anthro proportions were due to the fact that they don't hang around that much and any stories that do feature them are feral (pony). In some RPs Lightning is very curvy, but that's just RPs.
Well, I can't wait to see more! Thank you! So will you be alternating between the two stories? One chapter here one chapter there? Two chapters here two chapters there? Etc?
11243463 I’m a big fan of cosmic horror, so when we wanted to tackle Changelings again, I figured I try something different with a Mi-Go Cordyceps angle.
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It's here!
11242136
Yep! Look forward to your thoughts!
interesting, what got you the idea?
11242143
Chrysalis Resistance timeline in season 5 of MLP.
11242149
of course, eager to see how it goes. If you fin any use for Hanzal and/or Candy, go ahead, i don't mind
11242153
This story is quite packed, but I'll keep them in mind!
11242158
just a friendly offer if you need them
11242161
No problem.
11242140
Well for one, seeing the three headed dragon getting ready to fuck Bea, Icyln, and Midnight reminded me a lot of War vs Shining! Ngl I kind of expected something to happen *blushes* XD
Is this dragon bigger than Midnight though? Proportion wise I think Midnight probably has him beat, but would he be bigger than Midnight? Idk, but either ways I don't think Midnight would've liked to experience that without any preparation XD
I'm surprised Icyln's a boy. Like Beatrix said before, it's not gender that's the problem, how Iclyn acts. Hopefully things will improve.
I'm excited to see what will happen to Lightning Spark. Damn, Snowy Blizzard got wrecked though. I wonder how Lightning Spark will react to hear that Thunder Storm wasn't her father, instead it was Shining Armor. So much guilt must be within Snowy.
I'm not surprised that Lightning Spark doesn't have as shapely assets. In fact, I was kind of expecting her to be flat all around, given that she probably wouldn't have been fed very well, much of her muscles must be very weakened and to the point of almost not functioning at all. They need to prevent prisoners from escaping right? In fat I wouldn't be surprised if one could see her bones.
I imagine that mares like Snowy would be properly fed only for the sake that they would survive pregnancy and be bred again. And well, if they're pregnant to the point where they're massively swollen, they probably wouldn't be able to escape even if they were freed and given a headstart. Poor Snowy! She must've been broken in so many times!
I wonder if Lightning Spark's body could recover and gain some mass. Again, considering that she had little to no mobility ever since she was captured when she was young, I'm surprised she could even walk and fly. Or be athletic. Thankfully she's determined to free herself and turn things around! Maybe after time passes she'll develop a better body, because again, I wouldn't be surprised that Lightning was all bones and little to no fat right now.
I wonder what the family heirloom is! I can't wait to see if this has any secrets!
11242161
hey!
11242182
Actually, I figure the changelings would keep the mares well-fed, simply to make them better breeding material. Lightning Spark is naturally more on the lean side, but she has fluffy fur like Midnight.
11242205
Well, I assume Lightning hasn't been bred yet as otherwise, she would've been like her mother. The changelings probably wouldn't give her any room to breathe once they began their process with her.
But I still imagine that mares who were already being bred would have 'top priority' food, leaving Lightning to be on the border of starvation. She'd get her full meals after she gets bred. Like, that would be an effective manner to get more willing subjects. As willing as it could be.
I doubt Lightning would get her exercise to be athletic. And wouldn't the changelings prefer to have very juicy mares that can make breeding easier? Thus that's why I say that until Lightning gets bred, she isn't given as much food. Just enough to let her live another day. That's just my opinion.
But yes, fluffy fur is a very good trait! Fluff!
11242212
I'm thinking they would try and tempt her with food in exchange for sex, but Lightning would resist, realizing they are trying to break down her resilience. They would also wait to breed mares until they're most fertile, fortunately for her!
11242212
I'm thinking they would try and tempt her with food in exchange for sex, but Lightning would resist, realizing they are trying to break down her resilience. They would also wait to breed mares until they're most fertile, fortunately for her!
11242180
much appreciated
11242188
that was to be expected to meet you here
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Yeah, that was my thinking. This is why Lightning wouldn't be as supple as she could've. She's flat basically. And yeah, it's a good thing that Lightning isn't at her fertile point. It's sad that Snowy Blizzard has been knocked up so many times. But at least Lightning Spark can perhaps give the team the changelings location so that when the war reactivates, they know where to strike.
I would find it very ironic that had Lightning gotten her meals or wasn't under changeling subjugation, she might've been very curvy. She wanted to be a Wonderbolt (which would be a military unit but still dedicated to flying), not a soldier persay.
"Dang it! Make me more aerodynamic!"
"... but curves are aerodynamic...?"
"GRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR"
11242218
Ye!
11242220
Lol! And I wouldn't call her 'flat', probably a B cup, basically bigger than Shadow Scythe (A cup) but smaller than Cerise. (C cup)
11242221 mhm
11242220
How comes you can be curvy, yet still be good at fighting, Moonlight?
Innocent whistle
11242182
Andrei is roughly around this size. Not overly giant, but fairly big.
Iclyn is transgendered and uses she/her pronouns. More on that will be explored.
11242225
I think Moonlight's a C cup in my lore? Athletic but shapely, body type similar to Cerise but a tad more muscle.
11242227
Badass pic!
11242231
Ikr? Partially where I built his backstory from.
11242223
Still, I would find it very ironic that after recovering from such poor conditions she's bigger than say Moonlight, who's in between B and C I imagine. Heck, it'd be even funnier if she was a D cup in the future, in between Cerise and Beatrix.
Moonlight: "Hey! How come you're bigger than me!?"
Lightning: "I know right! Stupid anti-aerodynamic assets..."
Lightning has not been fed properly, as a tactic to make her cave into the Changeling's desires. So it wouldn't be surprising that after getting some mass her body forms like this. Wouldn't be surprised that their parents genes could make her curvy despite Lightning wanting to be athletic.
Can't wait to see where you two take things!
11242225
XD
11242235
mhm
11242229
of course, i was just making up a joke, based on how she's curvy, yet a lunar guard it what me and Blitzer did together
11242227
I meant his *cough* *cough* trident *cough* *cough*, but I guess that also gives an idea.
Alright, I'll keep that in mind when addressing Icyln.
11242234
Yeah, I figure she is super fertile like her twin, although there isn't a female equivalent of a hyper-stallion.
11242242
Yeah. Luckily the changelings don't know this!
"Dang it! If only we actually fed her!"
11242233
Nice!
11242243
They might be able to smell she's very fertile, but don't comprehend the extent.
11242247
Yeah. Which is good for Lightning! I don't think any sane mare would trade their freedom for curviness.
Poor Snowy though, she's getting absolutely wrecked. Hopefully she can survive!
I never wondered what their anthro proportions were due to the fact that they don't hang around that much and any stories that do feature them are feral (pony). In some RPs Lightning is very curvy, but that's just RPs.
Well, I can't wait to see more! Thank you!
So will you be alternating between the two stories? One chapter here one chapter there? Two chapters here two chapters there? Etc?
11242255
Alternate I imagine, since they will cross over at key moments.
11242260
Alright, well I wish you and Nota luck!
Can't wait to see more of this new arc between Unbound and Prisoner
11242263
Definitely our most ambitious project!
11242266
Yep!
Look at that. Changeling/Mi-Go Hybrids, and a tricock dragon.
11243417
Both NotaPonyPerson's ideas!
11243430
NotaPonyPerson did the Mi-Go thing? I'm touched.
11243463
I’m a big fan of cosmic horror, so when we wanted to tackle Changelings again, I figured I try something different with a Mi-Go Cordyceps angle.
11243547
Oh this will be wonderfull. I'll throw you two things. See what you can do with them.
"Biogenerated Plasma Rifles"
"Biogenerated Plasma Shields"
And one final thing.
"Replaceable Bodies."
11243562
Hmm, I’ll see what I can do. Might not be full on biogenetic, but I’m sure we can apply those tropes in places.