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Thanks!

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you're welcome

(1) it's nice seeing Cerise treating Rheneas very well as a friend. And that she's welcome to join Midnight's herd. And yes, it's a pity that Doppia died but it's good that Rheneas had her body back. Gotta say tipsy Cerise x Rheneas was looking to be a hot scene until Beatrix came with the news. Oh well.

(2) Sad that the festivities had to end early for the group, especially for the soldiers since they run risk of dying. it's good that Iclyn is helping Beatrix to control her unstable power, that way her chaotic effects are minimal!

(3) Yay! More Lightning and Equinox moments! Wonder what's a Warband, probably will find out very quickly. I love their interactions a lot. Though as a Wonderbolt she would've eventually be formed into a soldier anyways as shown in the Crystal Empire timeline. Maybe she might be died instead of being captured as she would've been a greater threat.

(4) Wholesome and funny moment between Lightning and the racoons girl. Loved how Lightning seemed to care about the girl. And then the chase was cool. How fast is her and her brother's top speed? Also it would be interesting to see if and how fast Lightning is compared to Midnight.

Of course Equinox makes things more darker but it was still well written.

(5) I like the fox character, too bad that they'll have to have a rough start with him. If only he had given the pendant back. Surprised as to how skilled he is. Too bad that Lightning had her things stolen.

(6) I'm surprised that Moon Hammer is here. Seems that it is true that The Burning Days truly fused timelines. Liked how Lightning became flustered, and his wives are the Paradise Twins right? Nice to see Arcanum as well and apparently he was able to replicate Beatrix's magic! With two people using it maybe he can find the answer to controlling the power faster than Beatrix, who has to focus on so many things.

(7) At least it seems that the bandits aren't that ill-intention, it's just like how Moon Hammer said about tough times. Though yes, with how many dimensions being connected it wouldn't surprise me that failing this all dimensions would collapse into a singular world which probably would kill everyone.

(8l yeah I wish the best for Beatrix. And I wonder what will be the end result for Lightning. Who knows who she will end up with! It be interesting if that ended up being the fox.

Also for a moment I though the fox was hunting powerful artifacts and that the necklace was surprisingly one of them. Out of all the timelines Midnight's is getting beaten to the ground. Maybe it's supercharged with magic similar to Beatrix.

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1. Had a ton of fun writing that, I'd love more Cerise x Rheneas scenes but that's hard since she's with Ashen Dunes!

4. Midnight reaches speeds fast, Lightning starts slower but outpaces him at her max speed.

6. Yep, Moon Hammer's with the Paradise Planet twins! We'll meet them eventually, they've went through some major changes!

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1. Hmhmm, still it would be cool seeing it.
4. Ah that's cool. Yeah I'd consider Lightning to be the better of the two but Midnight's new Hyper Stallion + Awakened Stallion status now makes him stronger than her!
6. Beatrix Anomaly shifting fates again?

But it's true that Midnight's world is the one that's getting screwed the most hm?

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Yeah, Midnight's world is a lynchpin to everything Beatrix has altered over time. For instance Kyube was able to peer into the world Shadow Scythe's at, and saw Kitsune as she went for a swim.

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Hot.

Well Midnight's world was the focus of her wish when it came to getting a brother, and I guess her will to win later in Lightendark focused all that chaotic energy into his world.

Hopefully they'll be able to fix things otherwise Midnight's world will be sent through another and potential final fatal distortion. Though maybe it could also become the hub that connects all dimensions since it doesn't seem like the Manor will be on their side anymore.

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Yep, can't wait to show what's happening at the manor with the next Undeath and Rebirth chapter!

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Cool! I like both stories!

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1. It be pretty hot having the royal siblings share partners in an orgy, I will say~
5. More about Kyube and Chisana (as well as their dimension) will be revealed the next time they’re encountered. I’ve been wanting to introduce them into the story for sometime!
6. Arcanum in particular I’m looking forward to writing dialogue for. Hope to do his character justice!

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Yes! I can't wait to see everything! And I can't wait to see how things changed!
I wonder where the final battle will start, in Undead and Rebirth or Prisoners of War. Or what if there are two!? That'd be very cool.
Or perhaps that final battle reserved for a third story as the dimensions begin to crumble, Midnight's world is pretty much going to get obliviated soon if the worst outcome comes to pass.

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Lots of villains in Undeath and Rebirth, so I imagine some climatic stuff will go down! Meanwhile, Prisoners of War will eventually have armies clashing...

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Also I can't wait to see Midnight and Lightning meeting up at last though I imagine that their first encounter will be a bit awkward considering how long they've been apart and how Midnight has become an Awakened Hyper Stallion. In a way I plan JAM to show how awkward things can be, but mostly from Midnight's perspective as he's pretty pent up and has to be around a hot sister. Maybe the opposite will happen here based on Lightning getting flustered around Moon Hammer?

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Would have loved to write Cerise getting down with Rheneas, but she wasn't sure how comfortable Rheneas would be with that and so she held back! Although the alchohol made her a little looser...

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Poor Lighting is pretty pent up, hopefully she'll find a partner eventually!

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Oh dear. Yeah that's kind of expected. Equestria's population will once again. I wouldn't be surprised that with all the mess Midnight's world will reach population levels similar to Beatrix's world, which itself had multiple conflicts. But at least Midnight's world has a very very high birth rate due to something I speculated which I told you.

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Btw I theorized that since changelings can only use mares as incubators, then the whole concept of infertility potions gets thrown out of the window. In Shining Force it made sense due to the Cult taking mares as broodmares, but here I imagine that Midnight's world mares take fertility potions to produce tons of foals to keep up with changeling populations, thus making Midnight's world population greater than Beatrix and Cerise's world, combined I dare say. Though that might change soon oof.

In fact, I wouldn't be surprised if 'taking the pill/potion' means a completely different thing here, which could lead to messy situations as the concept of needing infertility potions would be rarely used. Different enemies require different courses of action.

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Yep! Can't wait to see a chapter about that in the future!

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Hopefully they can find time sometime in the future… yknow, if all things go well!

It’ll be interesting to see who Lightning connects with outside of her brother.

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All right. Arcanum Folklore's creator here. I would like to point you all to the historical somewhat cursed connection Folklore's entire bloodline has to the Changelings right here. It should not be surprising. He is only a second generation Equestrian. He still speaks and knows of the Erenn ways.

https://www.fimfiction.net/blog/965282/the-history-between-arcanum-folklore-the-erenn-irish-unicorns-and-the-changelings

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okay, duly noted

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I like how you properly tied the changelings to their mythic counterparts! Although in my lore they die fairly easily, and tend to rely on shapeshifting and sheer numbers to thrive. Still, Arcanum might be in good company as Midnight Blitzer has a vendetta against them too!

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Oh hey there! Nice seeing you!

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Hmmm, thinking of who could be a good candidate as a partner for Lightning. I think Kyube has potential despite the rocky start!

No matter who you choose I can't wait to see what will happen in the future!

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Hello. I brought beer.

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Nice!

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His vendetta is less personal, as it is more of a situation where he can't imagine any time when Changelings and Erenn Unicorns weren't mortal enemies. That is over eleven-hundred years of animosity. That and Changelings exist because Druids invented a weapon that exterminated so many Tuatha de Dannan that they had to hide away in absolute isolation and the resulting predictable inbreeding created the frigging Fairies.

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Mmm! So sorta like the Time Lords and Daleks from Doctor Who?

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I am more bound to give real world examples. But I rather not as it would kick a hornets nest.

The Erenn are just the Irish with their Mythology actually being history.

But alright. It's a good take on it.

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Ahh, I see! Time to brush on my Irish mythology then

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Here is also the Biography, Weapons, and The Summary of the world Arcanum Folklore comes from.

https://www.fimfiction.net/blog/863286/oc-showcase-arcanum-folklore-phd

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Nice!

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Thank you.

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Very handy! He's quite powerful though so we'll probably have to tone him down a bit to match the lower threat levels here, as I likewise had to nerf my OCs Kitsune and Wispy Willow, otherwise they'd dominate the situation! Still, Arcanum already managed to replicate Beatrix's spacial magic on a small scale, which is quite a tremendous feat!

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He is a lot more versatile and violent than he is powerful. Technique over power. He is incapable of creating barriers or teleporting actually. He can do summonings because in his universe the power for the summon comes form the spirit or object you are bringing forth and the sacrifice if needed. And reanimation doesn't actually take a ton of power to pull off, just concentration and control specially if the corpse is an hour or so fresh.

The most dangerous thing about him is the fact that he is an ever increasing in size walking Occult Library. If you notice his stories his weapon master skillset is the real winner. Ironically enhanced by his precise magick control. (Years of spinning three coins with his mind and metal visualization training will do that.)