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It's finally nice to see a Mad Max style story. I've been hoping to see more Wasteland stories on this site that are not Fallout based.

Is this before the thousand year banishment, or after Nightmare Moon is defeated and turn back into Luna by the Mane Six?

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This is after NMM was purified. The reason I didn't add Mane Six tag is because they won't appear too often, of course they will be mentioned, and they villian defeating moments will be included. I'm just trying to let myself be inspired by Project Centurion but not to copy it that's why I'm asking for your ideas to keep it itself.

He killed guardsponies. First meeting was unpleasant...

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They attack him first, rather unprovoked mind you. He was just minding his own business, just driving, didn't do anything bad ( As of yet. ). Until those dumb guards show up, and attack him for no damn reason. NO introduction, or "who are you" and "state your business" kind of thing.


They are NO BETTER than the War Boys themselves that always likes to attack everybody in the wasteland. Plus, the main character come from a post-apocalyptic version of earth. Full of maniacs, and psychos. What do you think is gonna happened when those idiotic pony guards just attack him willy nilly.


Plus, it's mostly Celestia's fault for not telling her guards to stand down, and talk to Strike peacefully.


Hopefully, you can address this, author.

111Thank you for notifying of this issue. I see what I can do about it.🙂



*edit* done. And while I was writing I thought about if you didn't wanted a password for yet unpublished chapters to help me write

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No thanks, I'm good. Besides, I'm actually helping someone else for his WW2 story a long while ago.

i woudln't mind if you wrote numbers numbericly.

This story is rather good.

Don't rush. That's all i can say. don't rush.

Also, for another story idea, maybe a timberwolf decides to be friendly. Ends up as an anthro and gets a harem

The grifin's tongue was cut out and the guardsmare fired immediately.

Woah damn.

With no direction and knowledge of where the office is located, Strike could only wander the castle's halls and hope to find it soon. As he was wandering the halls he came across maids and solar guards and while the maids either moved out of his way or pretended the he was not there, the guards weren't as quiet.

"Freak."

"Beast."

"They should throw you into the tartarus."

"The princess shouldn't be protected by a monster."

These and other opinions were said as Strike continued to traverse the halls and comiting them to his memory as best as he could. He checked every door that looked like they led into an office instead of bed chamber before giving up and going back into the princesse's office. Opening the door, he found her standing inside the office. They were both looking at each other before Luna came up to him.

Assholes. Strike will remember this.

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He was comminting the halls, not the insults. My bad.:twilightsheepish::facehoof:

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You're not making any sense to me? Do you know what committing even means? :applejackunsure:

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Sorry. I have asperger and sometimes say things in a way that come off as weird or down right idiotic. Btw what do you think of THIS story so far?

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Fine so far, didn't like some ponies rude treatment over Strike. Sure, he did attack and killed some guards. But he came from a f**** up post-apocalyptic alternate earth. He is rightfully "jumpy".

They will all be frickin shocked, and actually pity him if they knew the truth.

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