The worst of winters for Twilight becomes an unexpected quest to find the unknown. Missing from the Canterlot gardens, the stone statues were stolen one night. Discord may be released again, and that thought becomes the worry of the unicorn.
But, there are other tales that haven't been told. The princesses worry about something bigger standing behind the spirit of chaos, something that was sealed to prevent the total anarchy of nature from growing.
The remaining elements of harmony, guided by the moon travel to the outsides of Equestria to know what are the plans of the Draconequus.
(the story is one of my first works of prose literature. Understand that i accept any suggestions for improvement or changes)
Chapters (1)
I liked. I want some more :D
Ah, this is definitely the start of something very interesting. However, I did have some trouble following or completely understanding what happened in the first chapter. With that said, suggestion I would make to help improve this would include making it clear from whose perspective the story takes place, establishing where the ponies are in relation to their surroundings, showing the reactions of the characters (rather than telling them), and limiting your use of ellipses throughout the text (since this gets a bit distracting).
Strive for clarity! For instance, when you say: "It seemed the sun did not want to rise, as it was slow and lazily rising from the mountains. The fields were covered in a shiny tone of green that wasn’t natural of the station," during the first few lines, your readers might be left wondering if you meant to say "season" instead. Or did you? This detail kind of comes in a rushed way, so you should take more time to establish this part of the setting.
I hope this helps!