Mobile Suit Gundam: Alicorn

by Alines Reinhard

Dear my future friend

Dear my future friend(s)...

First off, thank you for accepting our friendship! You have come a long way, through space and time, just to befriend us! You can’t imagine how precious that is to us! It is like a star far far away in the universe suddenly deciding to descend down to Equestria, becoming a pony, or a creature and saying “Hello, I’m your new friend!”! Isn’t that wholesome!

So, let me introduce you to our group. First is Butter Burger: he is an energetic pony who owns a fast food restaurant. I love how funny he was, despite the fact that he had to run that restaurant all by himself after he lost his family in a terrible accident. Perhaps, being funny all the time is how he combats his depression. His food is somewhat decent, but he tries to improve it every single day!

Next, meet Griselda: an honest to heart griffon with a passion to join the Wonderbolts! She is currently training herself in order to fulfill her dream. Although she sometimes can be overly honest, she is a very responsible and reliable friend. You would like to fly with her!.

Then, there’s Yamina. The cute, sweet yak that we all love: the creature that always helps relieve tension whenever we have some, pardon me, problems with each other. She have a passion to open a kindergarten since she love fillies and colts a lot. She might be weak from the outside, but don’t underestimate her courage in her!

And here comes Spring Garden! She is a Princess, obviously! And she is the prettiest kirin around, which is a somewhat fairytale-ish thing about being a kirin princess. She has passion in making magic potions, which have helped her community as well as Ponyville dozens of times. Oh and did I also tell you that she also has an interest in ballet? She is also still learning it, but there is no doubt we will support her whenever she has a performance, and we will be allowed to join us as well!

Finally, there’s me! I am a unicorn pony who from just a year ago didn't even bother to make friends, let alone being in a group of these wonderful creatures! I was once too busy that I’m against making friends. But, Princess Twilight and her friends have enlightened me and encouraged me to join the School of Friendship. I was completely overwhelmed by how beautiful friendship is just by the first week at the School of Friendship, mostly thanks to that one adventure to retrieve colors back to Ponyville from an evil sorcerer named Jinx… We’ll tell you that story when we finally meet you,

Anyway, I hope you can find this letter. You should come fast, because me and my friends can’t wait to meet you.

Love.

Luster Dawn and Co.

Comments

[Fik45579]

Can i use the title and the gundam unit? But I'm not copy entire things because im creating my own story line and lore, based on U.C, Post Disaster, Cosmic Era, and After War.

[coopda]

this story seems to be the victim of a very rough translation, I think having an English proofreader or even using a program like Grammarly would help a lot. Especially in the story description, it is pretty much unreadable in its current state.
Grammarly's full package requires payment, but there is a lite version you can install in Extensions using the Google Chrome Store. I don't know if it works in Windows 11 because I refuse to update.

[Alines Reinhard]

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Finally someone say this. Thank you!

Yes, English is not my mother language and I still have some problem speaking English irl. However, I did use Grammarly and also several types of proofreader (including GoogleDocs). I my opinion I think why this happened it is mostly because I haven't really mastered in this language to properly write a novel like this.

Once again, thank you for your feedback.