the plan failed, the power of Princess Cadence and Shining Armor blasted away all the changelings with Queen Chrysalis alongside them. she lands burned and bruised in a small forest nearby Canterlot. Somepony finds her and surprisingly does not attack her...
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there is typo at chrysalis and Surrounded
it should be this
The area around was full of green grass with some trees scattered here and there, surrounded by a wonderful blue sky. All of this did nothing but make Chrysalis even more angry that her plan failed, but her anger was forcefully pushed back by a stinging pain, bruises from the fall and burn marks from the magic Blast forced her to limp towards a tree and lie next to it to close her eyes and recover a bit.
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thank you, I'll fix it
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next chapters will be more consistent
All caught up now and looking forward to when the next chapter will come, keep up the awesome work!