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The Dark Wolf
This is the name I use to express my fetishes. And my platonic wam interest.
The Dark Wolf
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nice work
The ending was a bit anticlimactic in my opinion. The premise also a little weak but it DID get me to laugh more than once so: liked.
Not sure why peeps bother leave dislikes on stories anymore. Here's my unnecessary but detailed take: I eventually came to see the main joke here as the writer trying to play on normalizing the subject. You see, people look at normalization and attach negative connotation to the word, and societally speaking it is, to try and normalize something is to make the unpopular and unfavored acts acceptable in commonplace. The way I interpret it here, normalization is a creative writing tactic in which the writer tries to immerse the readers into the idea that what's going on isn't entirely out of the norm and it's okay sometimes to not entice skepticisms and ignore the thought of a scenario being necessarily realistic by the characters, canonically or otherwise. In order to read the story, you're made to accept, even if just once, that unique perspective in the characters' "alt universe" that says, this situation isn't what you expect it would be, cringe or uncomfortable. At some point it becomes up to the reader to choose whether or not they can make that simple exception, if you will. That's why they dislike it, they are unwilling to accept it as normal, they're not looking at it for it's creative value.
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Interesting theory, though not quite what I was actually going for (just a fetish fantasy that came to mind when I was half-asleep), but it would still be nice if it had that effect. At the very least making it so people didn't have to be super embarrassed if they ever wet themselves. (Whatever my fantasies I would never wish extreme humiliation on anyone in real life, male or female)
One has to wonder, what makes pee inherently sexual? I mean, yes, I have the fetish, so I'll only ever see it that way myself, but the reason it's even called a fetish is because it's something that isn't inherently sexual, or at least not technically. Why do people without the fetish who hate it see it as inherently sexual and go as far as to ban scenes explicitly showing pee from TV, even if it doesn't show the part of the body where it came out? (It being considered "taboo" might be part of what made it a fetish to me) I mean, it's understandable for people to find it disgusting, double so for scat (I once did, actually). But other stuff that's deemed "disgusting" is still deemed SFW so who made pee seen as sexual and why? Every single person in the world goes to the bathroom so it's not like they haven't seen it before, it's just the parts of the body where it comes out that should be NSFW. (Which wouldn't be shown in case of wetting) Same with farting, which isn't deemed kid-friendly enough to be shown in MLP (though implying it with whoopee cushions is another story, and the comics are more mature and did show Rarity farting onscreen).
But at the end of the day the story was only meant for people who already like the content one way or the other.
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Sorry, did I miss an issue of the comics?
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Issue 8 of the comics, Part 4 of the Nightmare Rarity arc. Part 3/Issue 7 alludes to this but in Part 4/Issue 8 it is actually shown in flashback.