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After finding a "prophecy" of a murder plot scrawled on a book in the Canterlot Archives, three friends decide to make a time portal to the past, with the excuse of discovering the past. Hindering their journey, however, is an evil cult bent on destroying them and a harsh and unforgiving past. With many threats from all directions, who knows if they will return in three pieces, or even at all?
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OCs! OCs EVERYWHERES!
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But seriously, its refreshing to not see the romance tag.
1310060 I personally don't see an OC-driven or an OC-based story as being something bad just because. It all depends on what the author does with them and how he/she elaborates the plot.
1310085 Of course, I was joking. OCs are obviously essential for this story.
I was just pointing out there was no M6/OC shipping, which, in most instances, is a good thing.
Like the guy above said, the OC cover is a major turn off to people, just saying.
And also, thank you for no romance with the mane 6, that would have made this worse, so good for you.
Now the concept, is odd yes, but unique, I'll give it that.
So good luck with this
Sorry, it was made with 10 minutes on GIMP. A new cover is coming very soon.
Thanks for the feedback!
Herro! Glad to see this is finally published. Except for the fact that we're (read: you) going to have to work a bit more on it. Either way. Have a moustache. :
Edit: Whoops. Almost forgot. FIRST! AT LEAST ON THIS CHAPTER!
“Lightning Cloud isn’t crazy, a doctor had him tested! He’s 80 percent sane... or was that insane?” :
Yeah, we (read you) is right
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Can you try and get the rest of the team on? (I guess that's what I'm going to refer to them as) It kind of drives me crazy
when I have to work with other OCs that I really don't have a clear image of.
If you don't have a clear image of them, paint one of them. And if they don't like it, tell them to change it themselves.
Good premise, but this needs more description, both of the characters' expressions/emotions/thoughts and their surroundings to orient the reader.
Also, of the three main characters here, who is the viewpoint character? (Whose mind/eyes are we seeing the action through?) Viewpoint is also very necessary for anchoring the reader in-story.
Work on these things and it might improve your ratings somewhat.
Viewpoint? This is a 3rd person story. The viewpoint is from an omniscient
narrator.
Description. Uh...