• Published 21st Feb 2021
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A Little Nightmare to a Wonderful Dream - black night sun



after "cheating" a callous deity in a truely unfair "game", and being rescued by its benevolent rival, two friends find themselves in the land of equestria.... but their troubles have only just begun...

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Comments ( 15 )

So the Spirit is protecting them from Twilight and her friends. Hmm, I wonder where this is going to go...

Wait why were they using the elements on them?

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Six has Shadow powers and mono has power over static and transmissions and it's said in the first that radio signals are considered dark due to the fact it interferes with magic

Oh.... the misunderstandings... oof. I can’t wait to see where it goes from here! Kinda hoping we see some pony nomes at some point...

Have a great day!!!!!

Yee it is good. But why pony attack children

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You forget pony's over react when it comes to things they find dangerous or evil

Ponys are racist and Hypercondriacs

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I'd classify ponies as self-righteous, xenophobic, control freaks.

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xenophobic is just the fear of other races which will lead to racism. And self-righteous.

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Tell me when they're not like that they did that with Zecora and I'm pretty sure the reason why the changelings invaded was because they couldn't get an audience with Princess Celestia so they were forced to attack because if they just attacked like that without trying diplomatic tactics first that would be the height of stupidity

Well it’s been awhile since I last re read this story and I’m still wanting to know more about this

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I'm working on it but inspiration is slow

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Understandable

When is the sequel!?

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