I love fluttercord and just MLP in general. I think I do a decent Discord impression
This story is a sequel to Discord's Third Eye
There is a lot of mixed signals between Treehugger, Fluttershy, and Discord. Discord already being in a state of confusion realizes that his life is going to take an interesting path.
Cover art by Hazel:
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yeees polyrights
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All in all its really good ^^
Interesting and funny story I give it 10 out of 11
I can't believe it's taken me this long to comment on this story...but even if it took me a while, I enjoyed it as a sequel!
This story picked up at a good place since the first. Of course Discord would be a little conflicted, feeling like he's in a love triangle, and of course he'd be hurt if he thinks he's losing the both of them.
Treehugger makes a very good point about how a kiss isn't enough--of course you need communication for a healthy relationship, especially with multiple partners.
I notice that you often have the characters say "Sigh" and "Gasp" instead of describing that they sighed or gasped. It was a little distracting, but not enough to completely take me out of the story.
Here are a few lines that I just really, personally enjoyed:
This just cracks me up
Ooh, gotta love some good, friendly teasing between Twilight and Discord.
Another part that just cracks me up!
The pacing may have been a little quick--but with Discord making snap emotional decisions (pretty in character for him), it makes sense. Overall, a very good read.