• Member Since 22nd Aug, 2020
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DeffBwade


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Can't believe he does not have some ptsd.

Hey this is really good it's definitely going to my favorites

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Thx for the constructive criticism, ill take it into consideration. Like i said, this is my first story, so ill try my best.

Okay. Appreciate the effort

Should've taken the dark route. Where he kills and tries to survive. The only way to get out would be the mirror multiverse. Who knows..he might stay the same or change.

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the mirror multiverse? whats that?

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Sorry i should've been more specific lol.
A mirror that Celestia hides that leads to Human Equestria versions. The way seeing it. He goes there, he stays the same or not then the entity brings him back. Human or not

Suddenly, a figure ran past the crow, startling it and causing it to fly off. The figure ran out of the factory and into the dark forest. It was running like a predator on all fours, and eventually, it jumped onto the branches of the trees. After a few minutes of jumping from tree to tree

He did it, he retuned to monke

Well, it was a fun ride.

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