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Will this story be continued? Was only able to skim thru it atm because I am on a time crunch and need to do something in a few, but this story seems really interesting!
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Honestly I saw a few people read it but never knew what other people thought of it so wasn't sure but I have been working on a couple of chapters either ways
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I am curious to see wiere this goes, maybe we can talk in PMs?
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Oh sure check your inbox
Why isn’t this rated M?
oh because some of the sex things are more dirty jokes and suggestive actions no real sex scenes
Sunset was glad she didn't have to deal with the girls. Seeing them after years of tormenting them made her feel acquired.
I think you meant Awkward
and released that if she were to start to stray,
And realize right here
And of course rainbow has to bust either a window or door to enter a room
Good chapter bud
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Thanks for the feedback Fox
Did you mean to put "I always had it, just not as much as I did a long time ago."?
After what I saw the night he saved me, I don't think he's from my direction but not human either."
And dimension here
Now on to the back story :)
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Thanks again for the correction but I wrote the first part that way is because the planet itself has magic not just my character I thought I described it that way guess I miss put something there
Nice chapter I wonder how he will handle Celestia. Can't wait
Little bit late for that, isn't it Celestia?
So, did the HuMane 5 see these events on the mirror in a similar way to how they saw events of Sunset's past?
In all honesty, I hope so, because it would show them that Sunset was basically abandoned by her mother figure, and that would probably help them understand Sunset better.
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Yep, that's my point and thoughts. To quote "To Kill a Mockingbird": 'You can never truly understand someone unless you walk a mile in their shoes.' those immortal words are the foundation for this chapter.
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VERY nice chapter!