Driven from their home planet of Equus by the atrocities of war, the remaining members of the pony race settle on the distant water planet of Elysia. However, hurts that run so deep are not easily healed and, again, ponykind becomes engaged in conflict. Six young friends, untainted by the prejudices of the rest of their kind, are faced with the decision to save their race, of fall with it.
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Oh this is off on a very good start, love the epicenes of the action that went on, not bad there wasn't any mech involved but I won't be nitpicky about it. So ponies or rather earth ponies could produce gems any more to fuel their industries I wonder why, and if it also affect the other tribes as well? I wonder what started this conflict, was it between the tribes, a civil war or was it something else? I can't wait to see the introduction other cast of characters and how they view the events of their old home world, could it be that this new world is actual planet that we see the show, and that the other races like the Griffins and the other arrived their later, could explain why their are some many different sentient races there. I wonder how the tec work with this other then ' it magic'. Looking forward to see more of this story, you might also want to put this story in a lot of groups for extra exposure for this, once you get a few chapters out, I would like Sci-fi stories get more attention then they they usually do.
Also if, sorry for the hustle on this, I just wanted to let you know that I am an experience cover artist here on Fim, you might have seen my stuff littering the site you can go see some of my work on my DA gallery here and and my youtube channel.
I hope to hear from you, and I wish you the best of luck in your story.
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Heya, Mix Up! Thanks so much for the feedback my friend! I always love to hear any kind of constructive criticism as it helps me route my work in the right direction and answer all of the big questions properly :). I hope it doesn't disappoint!
As I get closer to finishing the book Id definitely be interested in commissioning a cover (I've got another artist working on one at the moment but it never hurts to have two :) )
I LOVE your work by the way! I'm always amazed to see how many unique styles artists have in this fandom to truly make the work their own ^^
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Understood, I and not problem, I will still certainly eagerly awaiting for the next chapter to come up. I love Sci-fi and it's always fun to see how it can be adapted to the MLP.