Early humans knew little of peace in the primitive Equestria; so, Mother Nature set out to fix this. She's still not sure how this will do the job.
I deleted Book 2, since I have no more interest in this story. It was great fun to write, but my core idea was in his origin, and not really any real development after that. Feel free to take the story where you wish to in your own works, using the "Mother Universe".
I think you meant guests not quests.
Ok now on to the review I am loving this story and I'm wondering if you will have any shipping's. I will try to spot any errors and tell you. Now why the heck are there no other reviews?
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I will be trying to avoid shipping, for this initial story. I mean, someone will probably want to now ship Discord with Fyr and friends, but it happens, lol.
And I figured spellcheck missed out of place words.
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I only just uploaded the story to the one HiE group, so not many could see it.
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And as for the most part, canon stuff will likely be broken, lol. As like how he's using potions before he gets any sort of powers.