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Pinkie Pie's Splinter

When the Cake twins lost their ball in the bushes, Pinkie Pie gone in to get it out. Once she got out of the bush she got a splinter and tries to get it out, but luckily one of her friends might be there to help her.

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MLPFan9000

MLPFan9000 #1 · Oct 4th, 2020 · · ·

This is a really good story. At the time of reading this it's the newest story on the site. I've followed you and hope to see what else you come up with. Remember me when you blow up in popularity.

ExoticEon

ExoticEon #2 · Oct 4th, 2020 · · ·

I like it, but here’s some simple advice: revise and edit. Other than that, you're good!

WhatShouldIDo

WhatShouldIDo #3 · Oct 5th, 2020 · · ·

Needs some proofreading, but I do like the story.

YourUncleFuncle

YourUncleFuncle #4 · Oct 5th, 2020 · · ·

Well, you did it better than spongebob did.... In all seriousness though, great work for your first fic. Lighthearted things like this are always a treat to read. Keep going!