Suddenly dying sometimes leads to you questioning a lot of things. I am Summer Sol, twin sister of Celestia Sol, and this is my journey. If only I could go through it with my beloved... but maybe I will find her again? Perhaps I never lost her?
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I've remeber a story had had chapter lengths of upwards to 130k+...
Yeah, imagine that... Unfortunately, I don't remember it so where ever it is, is lost to me.
missing ponies, its probably Platinum. Also she is truly is Blueball's ancestor.
10600676
Yeah, I feel the same. I always get frustrated when something doesn't work in the way I want it to work. One of my teachers once said I used a completely different solution than intended and that it was way more efficient, I was quite proud of that. Then, immediately afterward, I disappointed him by not having done my homework. xD
Missing ponies makes me think of changelings. That one will be tricky, we might get a new allied race early if they play their cards right.
Could the dark artifacts be failed attempts by S to recreate his friends items?
10600803
*shrug*
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I'm not sure about 130ks, but this story Age of Crusades has an 80k chapter.
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seems more like discord as s only took his freinds artifacts to try make himself like them the reason it backfired is because it was interuptid if i am remembering it right. if not discord (honestly he is the only other villen i think of that isnt accoutid for that it could be) then maby platmin as she apparently wants all alicrons auto princessed so the alicorn amulate being one of these artifacts that was a "sucsess" while the others were tests and failures could be possible
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Oh, when I said 130k, I was being generous. My memory is saying it was something around 190k or higher, but I went with 130 to be on the safer side.
Edit: MUHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAAHAH I FOUND IT!
The Story My Little Pony Universal Magic has a chapter at 206 THOUSAND words!
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As much as I like long chapters... I suppose there is actually a thing like too long. Yikes, and here I thought 30k+ was already quite long.
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Yeah, long chapters are great, but there is a fine line between great and browser crashing. I'll happily read a story with a chapter at 50k, but when things go beyond and start to crash my browser then there's a problem. Problem being I want to read.
10605512
Feedback-wise, I could use a bit more information. Was it because of the crossover or the length? Or something else entirely? I tried to keep everything to 'You don't need to know the source material' as best as I could. Summer herself had no knowledge of Azeroth prior to their visit, after all. What she learned was basically a 'tiny' rundown of WoW without delving too deep into it. Heck, I've been playing WoW since I have been young and I still don't know everything about WoW. If it is some lack of information that made it unpleasant to read, then I apologize for that.
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To clarify, it was combination of the massive size of the chapter and an excess of information. At least for me anyway.
The trick would be piecing together enough history and lore from both worlds so they become relevant to each other, rather than going into detail about things that have no impact on the main story outside of being casually mentioned.
Another way for you to understand my point would would be me going into detail in my story about a video game, like Monster Hunter World for example, and having my audience trying to understand what I'm talking about without breaking down monster ecology, environments, and so on. The idea is to break down these things into their core components and showing the audience how these things have similarities with source material and your story. Then it becomes more of a seamless transition.
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I suppose you're right with that little bit of criticism. Out of the three 'major' info-dumps, the part with the history book could have been shortened. Although, I feel like I should explain why it wouldn't help the story if I were to cut most of that out, even though it might confuse most people that don't know the source material. For those that do know it, it would feel like I'm doing the crossover not enough justice (which is already somewhat the case, I guess).
Shortening the unnecessary information from the 'history book' part of the chapter would have only reduced the size of it by about six-hundred-ish words and completely cutting it out would have made the whole 'I want to understand a bit more of this world' seem a bit off, not to mention that it would have been weird for her to open the history book and only read 'There is a continent called Pandaria' and immediately stop reading it because she wants to go there. The 'orcs from another world' part was at most a way for them to come into contact with their duty to protect their allies and citizens from harm, so I don't know whether shortening that would be a good idea. The same could be said about the 'Emperor Shaohao and the history of Pandaria with the old god's corruption' because it was kinda relevant to the story and has, as you said, some similarity with things happening in their Equestria, even if it might not seem as obvious (both have an 'eldritch abomination' that continues to darken the world long after they are gone).
I hope my reasoning is at least somewhat understandable. It feels like I'm arguing for the sake of arguing and I am rarely the type of person that wants to do that over minor things.
I don’t like name dropping more humans especially NOW of all times.
ESPECIALLY A CHEMICAL WARFARE MANUFACTORY LIKE?????
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I assume you haven't watched Fringe, then.
10611865
Nope,Tv is for suckers without Netflix or Hulu to leech from
10611904
Lol, I suppose that is true. xD
So.... A few questions come to mind after finishing this chapter.
Will Yu'la ever grow up or not.?If she does then how big will she get? Will she age and need to breathe life into another jade dragon?
The mysterious artifacts are most likely done by Platinum what with her purchasing mysterious objects from the black market. Though the disappearance is not linked to Tirek and Platinum (still suspicious) may not be the culprit so who could it be? I doubt its the changeling since they probably won't be a thing yet.
Discord should be showing up soon too. Will he become a romantic interest to the princesses. God knows he exudes that troll atmosphere. Probably not but I'll never know.
Finally based on the fight sequence can I surmise that Celestia is the more combat oriented sibling? Not only is she adept at magic control but general combat as well. She gets best mare in my books.
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We will just have to see...
Romantic interest?
I... no. No. Fluffy bunnies, no! o_o
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Was... Or is he alive after all?
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Maybe I should have worded that in the past tense... But, to be honest, who knows what happened on that day? ;)
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Discord will be a thing soon, I promise. People have been waiting for that for quite a long time now. ;)
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Indeed.
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High praise. :3
Dawww Remembering him made me sooo saaad
Well the origin of the Alicorn amulet are obviously Bitchface. But what are the missing ponys used for? Or is it unrelated?
Great chapter.
I guess one can only try to be as less hypocritic as one can be... As long peaceful options are exhausted first and with seriouse intend.
Maybe Bitchface was somehow tracking Tirek and collecting pony that were to drained to resist? She sacreficed ponys before...
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I'm not going to spoiler anything in the comments directly, maybe give hints and so on, so you will have to keep speculating. What I am going to say, though, is that it won't be long until all those pesky questions will get answered. I have seen many theories already as to what is going to happen and so far, no one has come close to guessing it. :3
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Thanks for considering it.
Hoping for more soon...?
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Twin Suns Blog: Some stuff. Like, you know... stuff.
I hope that answers that question, dear. :3
Personaly i think its the Changlings keeping Equestria clean. Poded Pony give regular love harvests and opportunity to get unliked elements from Equestria that are not really missed. Criminals etc. would explain why there dissaperance was not noticed since everyone involved was happy to get em of the streets of Equestria.
Tirek got some of em of course but were are all the bodys? Perhaps the Changlings tailed Tirek and collected there weak & defenseless body. Win-win for the Hive.
10625993
He would have returned to his daughter by now...
Or he is hold captive to breed more Alicorns
DUN - DUN - DUUUN
Kingdom on a female ruled nation
Over the span if millenia? A lot
I doubt the mane six will ever be exposed like in the show with responsible leaders like Summer, Luna and Celestia
I wonder... Will the mane six be there children? All of em? Half? Perhaps some 'villain' like Starlight...
But are not all of them can/will archiv Alicorn hood?
The spell of 'magic' seem to aim for that...
Hm... Cadance Mi Amore,Twilight Sparkle, Shining Armor, Starlight Glimmer and perhaps Pinkie Pie? Would be surprised if you cant make Spike less of a doorwipe like in the series I wonder what a accended Dragon would be like
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You're going to hate me... *slowly backs away in shame*
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Did i hit the nail on its head? Was it ever stated how many children they had?
Cadance and Flurryheart... That would make for a delightful combo if a child of em, brother/sister become the parent of one another.
Shining Armor if he becomes a Alicorn would be the very first stallion of this subrace
Starlight Glimmer would be a tragic one since she grow up as singel foal and had to endure it since before she was born in a big familie.
I guess Twilights dark side is... Midnight?
Cadance dark side is... I dont know... Heartbleed?
Dont go for Blueblood I like him being not a ass onces in a while but seriously... Nobel born of Canterlot are suckers
How and when do the Trio will learn of there emergance in Equis/Equus ? Will Magic give them a Discord message or something? I guess they give them suttle Financial and educational support. Perhaps befriending there parents to help raise the foals they where robed before via 'magic summening' ?!
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No... no, you did not hit the nail on the head. That's as much as I'm going to say on the matter.
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Possible way. Cadance is the first one.
Shining is the second one. Shining making two foals Twilight (forbidden love with mother ) , second Flurryheart. Flurryheart perhaps the former elder brother wile become now the child of the former younger sister
So many possibel combinations to play around
Spike... Anything that gives him character development is fine by me ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
Hm... Can Fluttershy be a Batpony? Would explain the shyness and a batpony would be a nice mix in
Sooo... ... ... Pinkie Pie... She is... Difficult to write. Even Zecora would be...
Wait Wait Wait! Z-e-c-o-r-a . . . Huh... Remember how you might ignore the imortals of the series... What if... IF all imortals are from there familie!
1 Hypogriffon
1 Diamond Dog
1 Kirin
Sounds like a stunt Magic intencialy or not so mutch pulls
See this many races accended to Godhood
A joke Discord could enjoy of there mixed familie connection
10672067
You have some wild ideas... and you really will hate me for Shining Armor...
Really? ._.
You might be surprised. I have some things I have in mind in regards to that.
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Don't kill him outright, don't make him lose himself to insanity and don't make him torture ponie and ill be okay with everything else.
Either that or we will tie you to a chair while listening to Pinkie try to figure out the meaning of life.
That won't end well.
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Agreed. But by now we know by reading trough why and what Feynna means...
Don't read before you read trough the story or you get spoiled!
Did Luna and Summer make sure every singel dark artefact was taken when the leave the castle!? Or will the mane six pick up their slack?
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Who knows. Who knows...
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You teasing monster Now i think Summer just become forgetful to miss something like that... Than again Discord is going to happen sooo
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You gotta admit, Summer's memory is preeeetty selective.
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Sooo... How about Luna that literally build the trap rooms?