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Lol, cool story bro... for real
I liked everything about this other then the Trixie part which seem a bit to random but *meh* good story.
I liked it!
Like the guy above me said, everything but the Trixie part was fine and I look forward to more!
Awesome so far but a bit rushed though. Details and that kind of stuff should be more common. but over all a great idea and a great chapter 1!
1192926 first of all, thanks for the feedback, and second the trixie scene was done by my little brother while he was in the bathroom. i was going to change it but i couldnt bring myself to do it
1193391 so you have wished it, so it shall be!
1191544 why thank you good sir/madam
1192907 the trixie scene was done by my little brother while he was in the bathroom. i was going to change it but i couldnt bring myself to do it, he was so happy that he wrote something for my story.
This is the type of mage that other mages wish they were.
1194564 that was the plan, still trying to pinpoint his weaknesses
He's to badass? 1194987
1195349 well while i feel he may be a bit overpowered I've introduced several elements that can pose a threat. the mane six as i pointed out in the story and doesn't his power resemble a certain character? there will be more as i develop the story and refine it into a real adventure.
I like the fact that he is overpowered, to me it makes it more interesting, I can't wait for the next chapter, as I really like how this is starting off
1196608 well wait no longer, i am on a roll!
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Thank you! You saved my sanity!
Lol drunk people are funny, regardless of what universe they are from! This chapter is really good, and now, it seems that I need more. Its as though I developed sone sort of addiction to reading whatever you post.
1197350 well i'm working on the next chapter as we speak, contains some surprises
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Woooooo! Surprises! They're the good kind right, not the kind where an ex tells you that you have kids, or the divorcing parents kind. Those aren't good surprises at all, anyways you work quick, which is a good thing. How long do you think you will keep this story going?
1197619 well each chapter is two or three days and it's a thirty day vacation, so ten to twelve chapters before i work on another story for a while and when that's finished i'll get started on the sequel. maybe a series of one shots in between maybe?
Sounds good, and so far each chapter is of decent length, neither too long nor too short. Some one shots would be good as well
1197735 well i have a personal rule that all my chapters have to be around 4k, it's just something that makes it more fun to read and write.
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Very true, there are a few stories that have very lengthy chapters that I'll read
1197763 they used to average out at 1k but that was about two years ago, and they SUCKED!!!
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Well now they're great!
1197788 well thanks... i'm sorry but i'm not used to praise, of any sort....
Well youre gonna have to get used to it, because it'd yah keep this up, you are gonna get lots from me!
1197807 well, umm, thanks. i think i'm feeling pride, feels nice
That's good! I'll try to make you have as much pride in your work as possible!
1197825 alright then, i'm only at about 650 words for the third chapter but i'm gonna take a break from it, the rollout has missed. (lol, pokemon.)
XD I see what you did there, it's no biggie, it's worth waiting for, besides it would be wrong to force to write nonstop, unless we at least payed minimum wage
1197854 hell for minimum wage you'd get chapter five by tomorrow.
Lol, wouldn't we all love to get payed for what we like to do, it's a great thing we don't though, I'd rather not think about the things some people would be doing
1197868 ya, i'd love to get paid for making up stories about ponies and playing league of legends. and pokemon, can't forget pokemon.
I read some Pokemon based stories sometimes, not as much as I used to, had to do eith the fact that agnph is still being restored to full functionality, that and sofurry doesn't have enough content that piques my interest
1197898 a few of them weren't bad, not much imagination in them though. crap, now i can't play with my friends
What do yah mean?
1197929 my league of legends friends are just dropping like flies, logging off left and right
Oh, thats no good
1197952 in their defense it's a little after midnight
Lol, it's 3 here
1197964 neat, well i guess i'll have to play with complete strangers
Thank god we have complete strangers
1197979 if we didnt then how would we deal with murder!? everything would be personal!
I know! People would feel sympathy when other people lost someone near and dear to them! It would be horrendous!!!!
1197995 or glorious, an eternal bloodbath as the population of the earth killed eachother in a slow cruel game. from the mind that brought you this story
Now that you put it that way, I think I need to start devouring others until I have enough power to rework the human psyche
1198022 you might want to employ Cho'gath then
Lol, so eating people as they are doesn't help with that then, well, there may be a few problems I will have to face soon enough
1198031 ya, indigestion would be a bitch
Yeah, So is passing the bones, sideways