I am the Devil who punishes the sinners. I will tear my way through those who dare cross my path and create a brighter future for those suffering. Sometimes in order to fight evil, one must become evil in order to do good for others.
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This was a complete 360 of what I thought was going to happen this chapter and holy shit did it catch me off guard. Great chapter! 👍
Nice.
I disagree, if Lock would have been too soft about this subject, they would have ignored him
He had to be strict about this
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Considering that quite a lot of stories have that heat cycle and how it's used in them, I'm happy how it ended like here
A lot of stories that have heat cycle when mares hunt males for sex, authors ignore that it's essentially rape and use it just to add clop and some "comedy" because running from being raped by mares is "funny" for some
Then again Lock had powers and wouldn't have been raped so it could be funny but I have seen stories where main characters didn't have powers to help them escape and were in real risk, danger
Sure it's a fantasy and fetish for some but when you try to build a world and add it there, it just ends up as rape on a big scale
It's the rarest moments gentlemen, a few stories where males are actually standing up to protect & lock up their manhood against every mares in heat season than agreeing to have sex or being raped by them. I gotta give a round of applause to you author, a job well done.
Not sure which would be first, but I get the feeling lust will be last. I imagine lust is with the caribou themselves, the question is, is Dainn lust? Is it possible lust has taken a non-living form? Perhaps the source of the perverted form the Crystal Heart has been forced to take? I know in Fall 'Canon' the Crystal Heart was actually physically reshaped, but given the age and power of the Heart it wouldn't be that simple, powerful dark magic or no. Then again Fall 'Canon' requires that a lot of things happen that can't be explained, so it's not exactly worthy source material for anything more than the general concepts.
...Anyway, first sin. First sin. Either greed or gluttony, since taking either the dragons or the changelings out of the corruption equation first would be best, not to mention the possibility of allying with them against this threat if they can be liberated from sin.
Hmmmm, either Greed or Lust I think.
I would say greed, because greed would probably effecting more species of Equestria than the others. Being Dragons, Changlings, and Griffons. Although, the Changlings are probably being effected by Envy plus if this is the Full Metal Alchemist Envy, then its got shape shifting powers. My question is which species would be effected the most by Sloth?
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This may actually be the first time someone has brought attention to how the heat cycle is just wrong. Also, I'm glad to see that even the damned can find happiness. Maybe that spells hope for me.
THANK YOU for addressing the entire 'heat is an excuse to rape people' aspect that is very common in this fandom.
If anything, people tend to get 'heat' wrong in terms of what it is. I could go on a huge rant about it as a wannabe biologist but in a nutshell, heat refers to the short window in which a creature is fertile can become pregnant. Technically, humans go into heat a few days out of every month. For horses it's every few months and if anything, it's the only time where a stallion can really approach a mare without getting kicked and bitten a bunch. EVEN THEN he risks getting kicked and there's instances of some stallions refusing certain mares because he got beat up too many times by them.
I worked on a horse ranch for a few years lol. I broke my long term quietness on this site JUST to put on my science hat an lecture a bit.
Marvelous!
Lust because it is what the Caribou are primarily for. Also I think it's the most deadliest sin.
Perfectly describes double standards! well-done!
Perfect. If your going against Envy, be careful. Envy maybe weaker than the other sins, doesn't mean its anymore dangerous than they are. If you ask me, the only way to defeat this sin is to give them what they want. And when they realize its more then they can handle, and it be one less deadly sin to worry about. Good idea eh Wilk?
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Good approach, I’ll definitely consider it. As for which Sin Lock will go after first, you’ll find out in the next chapter.
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It is said that a man who has nothing to lose is but a wild animal but one should fear a man who has something to lose, for he will fight to protect that something with the ferocity of a demon.
Whenever a male Caribou dies, he reverts back into his original form, that being a morbidly fat and mentally deranged neckbeard with a constant boner.
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Projecting?
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Reminds me of a video of a girl running her car repeatedly over her boyfriend for cheating on her. The girls on the internet cheered her on and shouted down anyone who spoke against it. She was not even arrested. Later it was revealed her boyfriend was not cheating on her, he was getting an engagement ring made for her and was going to propose.
The internet fools said the girl was still justified because “he could have been cheating”.
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Nah, I just meant it as a joke. I heard that it was actually some sexually deranged neckbeard(s) that came up with the Fall of Equestria idea in the first place, so I figured that I'd make a joke about it in a review.
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...Sarcasm?
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I'm sorry, but what's this about sarcasm? If you're asking if I was being sarcastic, then no. I don't know how you came to that conclusion.
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Everything goes over your head, doesn’t it? My previous reply was a self-aware sarcasm joke. My first was also a joke. This should have been obvious as your comment it was responding to was a joke. Unless you meant it genuinely in which case....ooookay then.
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Oh, okay, my bad.
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Although in my defense, one-word answers aren't exactly easy to interpret. I am also somewhat of an egghead, so as sometimes the case with those of us who have a natural talent involving knowledge, my common sense isn't the best either.
Aye mate, just pointing out, Shining Armor. It isn't spelled Shinning, its Shining. Sorry, it just has been bothering me since the beginning of this story.
Literal plothole in every "The heat is unbearable" cliche in fimfiction. If they made a temporary fix then someone is not far behind with the permanent one.
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😅
My bad…
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Dragons
The sin of hand holding
hhuumm...I'm sure everyone gonna hate me with what i'm gonna say but i'm not really happy with the thing TwilightXLock righ now, i mean the thing he was really angry about the heat (rape) and fight celestia because of that was extremely good (10/10) but put a romance just after? nah i think that totally breack what he say about lose him like a ally and gonna make him forgive them to fast, that can be more interesting if he was alone with flash and the princess make all they can for be sorry but he don't care
it should be: you're all a bunch of hypocties
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what do you mean by that; what is the pothole? what went wrong?
Or should it be "“Well the spell I casted does help
andso I only feel a little uncomfortable but I can manage,” Twilight said."Fuck yeah, finally a protagonist that isn't a complete idiot!! Finally someone says something about the fact that the mare's rape the stallions......
and there it goes
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But hey, can your really be mad at him.
Still not sure what they were saving twilight from he may be harsh on people but he can be nice considering he is protecting them from being attacked again and giving those brainwashed a second chance.
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I mean, I could've understood them being clingy, flirty, or just abit inappropriate. Like in the Game of Thrones universe/story. But honestly, it felt worse to see when that they got to the point of full-on chasing, attacking/trying to subdue, attempting to capture, and actually tying up the males to repeatedly rape them.
I mean how could they not realise that what they were doing was wrong/rape, especially during the time of the Caribou!? Even before then, they should've been better; smarter, than that. Especially the mane 6 and the Princesses. How could they act like that; how could they do something so wrong and treat others so badly? And not to mention, they'd all been doing that every heat season.
Even after the heat ends, it seems like they never realized it even once they return to normal.
I know that sometimes, the males manage to remain hidden, but that means that sometimes the mares; even the princesses actually end up successfully capturing stallions and then committing rape. It means they raped many times before. Not sure what happens afterwards though...Like how do they and their victims end up moving on; how does society move on from that?!
Even to this day, part of my mind still can't fully wrap around all that.