I am the Devil who punishes the sinners. I will tear my way through those who dare cross my path and create a brighter future for those suffering. Sometimes in order to fight evil, one must become evil in order to do good for others.
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So does he show interest in Twilight or did he just wink teasingly? Great chapter by the way!
Sense this is a crossover story, I may know a suitable punishment for the sins. Possibly far better.
Twilight got boll
1. Lock is an idiot, with the whole "I will have more blood on my hands, I will kill caribou so I'm bad, it makes me a murderer " and reading him lamenting about it makes me sick and groan from annoyance
Like for real, do something useful and not lament about it
From him, I would expect to understand that the world isn't white and black
2.
Sins, .........fucking really?
Of course, another story who wants to find scapegoats for all wars and other things that happened to humans
Great work keep it up
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Not sure he seems to have given all 4 Alicorns the vapors with his impressive wingspan, even the element bearers got the vapors upon seeing it. He could end up with any of them. Though I hope he ends up in a herd with all 4 princesses. After all who better to help Cadance and Flurry Heart feel true happiness and keep Flurry smiling after this war than the "man" who swore to Shining on his deathbed to make sure Flurry Heart smiles again. Plus it would be the perfect balance of good and evil after this war is over. The Princesses of Equestria the perfect good and Demetri Lockdrom the devil's right hand the perfect evil joined together in union to protect Equestria in perfect harmony.
Great story. I'm curious which Sin Lock will go after first. Personally I hope it's Pride first and Lust last.
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I hope he has thing for Twilight, that would be very nice
Loved this and I really look forward to seeing what happens next, also where is some paper I need to builld a ship
Well this is a great turn of events. Kinda reminds me of that movie shazam. Xd
Hope he kicks those sins ass.
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Great chapter onto the pairing i hope to see your idea. Till the next chapter peace.
One thing i love about the stories here is that they are self aware most of the times
Soooooo....can we get a ghost rider? Please?!
Ok, you lost me there, being edgy because edgy is a huge turnoff for me. Nothing on Earth is comparable to the stuff the caribou are doing, even the Nazis would've balked at it and they are the freakin' Nazis. We are talking about complete and total annihilation of cultures, identities, nations and freedom as well as the mass brainwashing and sexual enslavement of genders on a world wide scale and nothing, no matter how extreme your personal opinion, comes close to this in both contemporary and historical times. There is no feasible way for anyone on Earth to have an equivalent understanding of the experience and there are no enemies in modern times who actively seek to strip a person of everything, especially in the West. The closest you'll get is in the third world and even then the protagonist isn't from that part of the planet. I really wanted to like this story, but I just can't.
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I’m sorry you feel that way, but I appreciate you at least taking an interest in reading my story. Everyone has their own likes and dislikes I suppose.
Your....your fuckin' jokin right?
Never in a million years would I have ever come up with this shit...
I'm going through the motions right now if you couldn't already tell.
Oh and wars, don't get me started on that shit
I want to know how many people know what this is
Greylock...
I don't know why but maybe it's just the main character's name but it reminds me of it