I am the Devil who punishes the sinners. I will tear my way through those who dare cross my path and create a brighter future for those suffering. Sometimes in order to fight evil, one must become evil in order to do good for others.
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Nothing short of a beast could bring such death.
That fine great work
It should be "that won't make me change my mind". If you need an editor, I'm more than willing to do that job. Also this chapter was great, even with the small errors that I noticed.
Discords mad
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It does sound like whoever Discord gave his powers too is on the war path. Similar to Lock's quest in a much more brutal fashion. I'm not sure who this is, but Equestria is seriously becoming a busy place with outer worldly forces. Such as the Devil, the Angels, the Outsider, and whatever just attacked Salt Lick City.
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Or Discord himself may have possesed some beast and is tearing shit up himself maybe but you could be right to. Hmmm maybe his champion...is Spike! (I actually dont fully remember if he was anywhere in the story yet or not)
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Don't get me wrong, you have a lot of good ideas and present an interesting story with the Fall of Equestria stuff, the characterization just doesn't fit my tastes.
I may have been a bit over aggressive in my comment, but I respect you and your story regardless of my tastes. I wish you well with it and your other stories, now and down the line.
I think you got Flash and Zephyr switched a few times.
But other than that I'm really enjoying reading your story. Keep up the great work.
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D’oh!
Excuse me but when is the new chapter?
Phew, all caught up now and it's been quite the ride!
Ready for more!