I am the Devil who punishes the sinners. I will tear my way through those who dare cross my path and create a brighter future for those suffering. Sometimes in order to fight evil, one must become evil in order to do good for others.
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Keep going like this it is a very good story.
Oh no, the early heat season is upon us brothers. Make haste and head for the bunker mountains.
Random guy: Alert; Protect your face and balls! I REPEAT, PROTECT YOUR FACE AND BALLS!!!
I'm gonna guess he'll get the burning wings when he goes all out maybe his feathers will be able to become projectiles too. Loving the story so far.
I don't feel good about the whole apprentice thing
It feels as unnecessary stuff just to cram, crowd the story
At least he will only have one ability so at least it not so bad
In situations, stories like that, you should never make the main character have apprentices or give/copy his powers to others, it ends with that they have the same abilities and are just his copy, taking away uniqueness to the main character
This was a good chapter and so far a very good story. I wonder if lock will tell them about firearms anywho I look forward to next chapter and to see how this goes
So which sin are they going after first?
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Did he say specifically 'you will have my powers'? Nay, he said
not that it would specifically be one of the abilities he has shown.
Yeah but so far Lock has only been "injured" once and that did nothing to him. So far, the Caribou haven't been a threat to him.
Fire Logia!!
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Who would make a heart into a penis? I'm blaming lust for that one btw.
Honestly, I'm more interested in what fleetfoot and spitfire are gonna do 👀
Literally me today