I am the Devil who punishes the sinners. I will tear my way through those who dare cross my path and create a brighter future for those suffering. Sometimes in order to fight evil, one must become evil in order to do good for others.
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just remember that after a point he abandons his first character in favor of his shitty dinosaur transforming edward elric based oc.
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Man, why you gotta be like that? Don't hate, it's just a story. If you don't like it, just move on and don't say anything.
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Regardless, that doesn't make what they said any less true. Albeit, hopefully temporarily and the MC comes back soon. The story is Devil of the Caribou after all, not Dinosaur Man of the Caribou.
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man it would be nice it Lock was brought back but after they unceremoniously portaled him out and then changed the cover art for the story to edgy mc dinoangry I knew where this story was going and gave up on it. after a few chapters of the shallow self insert wish fulfilment that the story has turned into I just lost interest.
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I just want to make one thing clear to you people and anyone else reading my story. I did not abandon my OC. It was my decision to make to switch characters for the lead role and it is not permanent. There’s a difference between constructive criticism and just being mean. I don’t appreciate it when someone slams my story for no valid reason.
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You two must have worst memories than a person with Dementia. You point on his "Edward Elric phase" wouldn't had stopped when Lock helped him grow in size.
Don't go making comments that you go pulling out of your flanks. Because you are the ones ending up looking like fools.
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Wow you guys have worst memory skills than a Dementia patient.
If you actually read this story you'd remember that Draco's "Edward Elric" phase as you called it, ended when Lock helped his body grow.
Honestly if all you're gonna do is spit out negative comments with no constructive criticism, at least show some level of intelligence to know what you're saying.
In the end you two are just making yourself stupid by talking out of your flanks.
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holms just cause he got taller didn't change his shithead attitude. he's still an angry edgelord that only comes off as a crap power fantasy harem goon that can be seen as a poorly thought out insert that you two think is written well and he isn't. also news flash but as writers you really should be ready for bad, scathing or even ridiculously poorly written criticisms about the media you put out. I could be a lot more of an ass in my deconstruction but honestly given the tone the two of you have it would be pointless and a waste of both my and your time. you're set in your belief and I in mine and neither will convince the other to change.
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Hmm you're right, I should go read your work that you have so masterfully made.....oh wait you have nothing written. Mighty hilarious that you talk about us expecting trash talk from people like you, when you don't even put yourself out there to receive the same treatment.
I think this sums up my thoughts well.
I wonder if he can shift into a Compsognathus
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I think maybe he already did, maybe it was in the first chapter he was formally introduced, Lock and his apprentices thought he was a creature scurrying around a destroyed landscape in Manehattan
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Yeah that’s right, the only reason he had the main oc leave was to synchronize with the Game of Thrones universe in which he was there for a long while. For the record.
I get venting over parts that break or even ‘tarnish’ the continuity of the story but. That’s just way too harsh.
11311797 Amen, brah
And Saiyan B’s right;, I once pulled a bunch of negative or frustrated or shocked comments with said emotion because I couldn’t handle the plot twists and changes. (The Heat season incident) I eventually got cold turkey over it, despite a few relapses a long while ago. And by the way: Sgt* and Professor Lwhatever, just because some words here in the writing are profanity. Doesn’t mean you all get to talk like crap here. (well the crap mostly comes from the PrfL, not so much for u Sgt)
Loving the military strategy here.
Yeesh, what's her problem? All of a sudden she suddenly had such a rather snobbish attitude; before, she supposedly had a better attitude, especially ever since the times that Lock told them they needed to be better. Calling him "Beast" like that is just rude. I expected that sort of thing from Onyx(seargent arrogant/narcissistic), Bluballs, or some of the nobles.
Oh really huh? You're one to talk, let's not forget, you and your sister are the ones who never did much of anything since Lock showed up. And you're the ones who didn't even think about being hypocrites and acting so inconsiderately during and just before the heat season. Honestly, this attitude is such a disappointment, especially since she supposedly made effort to change herself to earn his trust back.