I am the Devil who punishes the sinners. I will tear my way through those who dare cross my path and create a brighter future for those suffering. Sometimes in order to fight evil, one must become evil in order to do good for others.
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Not bad
Great work keep it up great work
Leave it to angels to not see the whole picture. I mean I don't fault their logic since it is right from a certain point of view but even still they aren't giving the full story and instead have chosen to only give the parts that paint Lock's actions as evil.
<Sigh>I just had to give him that idea, didn't I?
Archangel Michael plan will backfire because he isn't more trustworthy than Lucifer and his manipulation of Phill will probably make him cut ties with angels later, stay gray(in good,light and evil,dark spectrum) or even swap to Lucifer's side
I don't think angels will have any allies here anyway
Equestria and other conquered countries by caribou will be on Lucifer/Lock side
Shock. Work together. Uneasy about ones methods. Fight each other. Work together with a compromise. These are what I see happening in future chapters.
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Nonono it's fine I should have seen this coming. It's what I get for not reading the romance tag XD. You're doing good on the story I'll give ya that.
I wonder what power the Angel will have for his champion, I mean the Devil uses Devil Fruits for his champion
Me have a idea! What is instead of killing every single Caribou, we focus on the adult males (if I'm correct) so the young will learn to not follow their fathers hoof steps.
I have to cautiously agreed with michael genocide is not the answer and lucifer is known for being a master manipulator and power comes with a price and I think Flash and dimitri do not realize how much violence changes a person and how he who fights monster becomes a monster, I am interested to see if you are gonna do a deconstruction of typical FOE stories. Something tells me lucifer has darker designs for equestria and the world the narrative spun earlier makes me serioisly question him.
Nice. A new ship, and a great crew at the ready. Also, whats your plan this time? Care to give a little preview?
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More towns to be liberated, possible partnership or rivalry, training the crew for the new ship, maaaaaaayyyybe a new addition to Lock’s apprenticeship, possible new love interest, and…a pony turned traitor no one would expect.
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Ok, ok. Not sure about adding more people like him and Flash. Cause I just got used to only two in this. Plus, I favor the love interest idea, about time too. I'm counting on you for how this story proceeds; let alone how to deal with Lust when you mention him.
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Phill-
Couple o' questions: If I accept, would tha' make Lock an me enemies, or could we still work together to achive a hybrid of the two outcomes? Ya'know, kill the bad 'uns, convert the better 'uns, it's not genocide but the bad 'uns are still dead? Or is this a "You are the Light, He is the Dark, only one can survive" kind of deal?
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I have to agree with you on this one
I highly doubt this, if the bullet had hit the head and wasn't a glancing shot he would be dead instantly, now if the bullet hit his jaw or lower part of his head where it wouldn't hit the brain he May still be alive for little bit
PS: great chapter, but the angels aren't seeing the whole picture so this is gonna be fun
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It actually was a glancing shot, good eye.
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Michael called Lucifer's tongue silver while cherry picking information. Meanwhile Lucifer has been upfront with his champion about his motives.
And people wonder why there're so many who say that the Christian God was a massive control freak with an even bigger ego and Lucifer's actions against His will were efforts to give Humans the ability to think for themselves, rather than the black and white, good and evil bit Christians are fed about the dichotomy between God and Lucifer.
Make the story more longer
Took em long enough
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Fixed
Frankly, I could have done without this particular wrinkle.