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I'm excited to see Doom Slayer as a pony, your concept I very interesting and I already want to see how will this progress.
You have a good story, keep going.
This is going very well, you're using a good wording and the information at the end is very useful too.
You may try to explore a bit further in the feelings or thoughts of the character, other than that everything goes excellent.
This was a good improvement, I can see you used more effort in placing a scene based on the feelings of Buckshot, just be careful with very long paragraphs of talking, try to use some actions between the talking and don't give to much of development in a very short space or else it will feel a bit overwhelming.
I'm excited to finally see the suit, wonder if we are going to see any members of the original show.
Great work.
Also, why did you delete the message you sent me?
it was good, nothing wrong with it.
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Unfortunately for you, it would appear that this is Doom Marine (Although according to ID Software they are the same person...so...).
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Oh... It's fine, the point is to RIP AND TEAR UNTIL IT IS DONE
And they have named him the Doompony challenging all the overlords of hell his range has no end and his hatred was endless tearing through all the Demons of hell when his endless rage he cast all demons and Devils Into Darkness until one of Titan size that rise up to challenge the Doompony the battle was undescribable and lasted for five years but the Titan has lost but the Doompony was injured from the battle suffer destroying him we place them into the coffin and guard this coffin hoping that He Who Walks the planes of hell remains asleep for all eternity.
This is really good Loving it. I have one question tho
How often do you work on this story like every few days or whenever you have free time?
Because its fucking awsome and im sure im not the only one wanting to get an idea how long it takes to update this Story
Other wise GREAT WORK I am def following this and Favoriting it so...
Rip and Tear
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how does he view the world?
Don't you mean warships? Maybe it's just me, but when I think warp ships I think Warhammer 40K.
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DOOM Slayer is not in my story, at least not how you'd think he would be.
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warp ships like in star trek
This story is exalant 100 out of 100
Excellent new Chatter and excellent wirting.
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But isn't this story "just" a Doom crossover?
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they're not from Star Trek, but they're like the ones in Star Trek