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I like to write, but I rarely finish writing long stories lol.

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This is literally just a book for my oneshots. I have some downright crazy ideas at times, and I'd like a place to write them all down. A good thing to mention is that I won't be holding these to the same standard as my normal stories, since they're just to keep an idea from driving me crazy. There will likely be more pacing issues and probably some grammatical errors due to me not checking multiple times to make sure it's perfect.

That being said, these hopefully won't be steaming hot piles of garbage; I have more pride than that. These will likely be hit or miss for most of y'all.

As for a full blown story, maybe. It really depends on if I have the motivation to actually write something.

Please note that the warnings will not be for every chapter, but you should most certainly read at your own discretion. There will be absolutely no sex in this book, but I can't say with certainty that anything else is off the table.

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Twilight sighed, lingering outside the hospital for a second or so longer than she should have. It pained her immensly to see Scootaloo like this....but....life happens....and all you can do is do your best to move past it.

*immensely :moustache:

My overall reaction to this:



:rainbowhuh:

In terms of the fic:

HECK YEA-

Batponies and Luna/Nightmare over pathetic Royal Guard, ez. Gimme that Night Guard.

In terms of the A/N:

Yes, Luna definitely needs more than "nah fam it's ight and biz". Twilight has definitely helped her along, but the core problem hasn't really been solved of "nobody likes the night and just sleeps through it", huh?

Personally my power scaling of the alicorns goes like this, from weakest to strongest:
(Note I have no real evidence for this; I just like the idea.)

Weakest- Cadence (ugggggggghhhhhh-)

Less Weak- Celestia (she might be holding back, but she looks really pathetic so far)

Middle- Luna (I love Luna, trust me, but a millennia away from any sort of support or experience has likely drastically reduced her combat ability and overall power)

Stronger- Flurry Heart (this is based on future potential and not current times, mind; after all, Flurry is the first alicorn to be BORN as such)

Best- Twilight Sparkle (I mean she is literally the element of magic, m8; she's shown more potential than any of the others, she just never goes full force [I swear she was holding back against Starlight, fite me])

Bester- Nyx (yes I know she's an OC but I like her and she's kewl so there)

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Makes sense, I don't know if Twilight is that strong, I'd place her under Luna. She's definitely smart, but Starlight has skewed my perception of her, and the whole Tirek thing was with four alicorns' magic. Then again, we haven't seen Luna do much other than battle her sister, who needed the elements to win, and jump through dreams and stuff. I'm not horribly familiar with later seasons, so there may or may not be more examples. Twilight seems to struggle with larger scale spells, even if they're supposedly simple and she really doesn't seem horribly magically powerful, then again, I'm not a pony and don't known the cut off for average. That was one hell of a run on sentence.

As for Nyx, I'm not familiar with her, so I can't say.

This one-shot came after a very frustrating day, and I decided to write about Luna, since that usually cheers me up and I'd been surfing YouTube for a while with no results, so I apologize for the hostile A/N, it is worded rather nicely aside from the swearing, so I think I'll keep it as is.

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