Being transported to a new world wasn't exactly on Trixie's to do list, nor was it on her bucket list, but when confronted with a caring and hopeful father in the new world, well she wouldn't want to disappoint him, now would she!
After a bit of adjusting, she's shoved onto a Pokémon Journey, it had been her counterpart's goal to be the best Pokémon Trainer in the world! And really, no version of Trixie ever went for a lame dream, so what if her magic caused a few issues, that wasn't stopping her! If it took traveling to all the regions and battling in all the leagues to be the best trainer, then that's what she'd do!
Chapters (2)
Well, this is something. It's Pokémon not pokemon.
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Thanks, I'm operating by the English grammar rules, but I will fix the accent mistake, I'm sorry.
Ah, a promising young lad/lass/something undetermined! This is already off to a great (albeit short) start!
I mostly liked what I saw, but just a bit of advice: don't rush your writing when possible. I totally understand if that's more comfortable for you, but I suggest adding detail when possible to flesh it out; makes it more interesting, eh?
Also: Trixie + Pokemon? I expect it'll have... interesting results. cough I'm sure she'll have some good reactions to Ponyta/Rapidash and Liepard.
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Don't worry about it as long as you fix it. Also, I think I will keep reading when more chapters come.
definitely interested in seeing more of this! i wonder which starter she will get?
So, what happened to her counterpart? I mean, I doubt that she just ceased to exist, she had to have ended up somewhere.
Please don't get charmander please charizard has so much attention over the other two
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CHarazard for life, Screw the turtle and plant
Me: NO, OH SHIT! *RUNS AWAY
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It's simple she left her with the hypno's who took her off for an eternity in their guarden of shadow
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Oh shit here we go again
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I'm sorry? I don't think I understand.
This story is pretty interesting. Although you should probably work a bit on the pacing. It’s a little too fast for my tastes.
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Hypno is known for kidnapping pokedex entry
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They swapped.
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Pacing's always been one of my biggest issues with writing; that's why my chapters are either really short or really long. I'll see if I can fix it, or at least improve, by the next chapter.
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If you want any help I'll be happy to assist
It's a ok story, but the only thing that bugs me is that Trixie accept that she was a human a little to fast, I know that part was in the first chapter, I'm just slow sometimes.
Maybe you should extend the conversation between Trixie and Damien. This seems just the slightest bit too extreme for him. Maybe give him more of a reason to dislike her. It seems too rushed.