Of All The Stars
written by Waiting on my 20s
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*reads the foreword*
What. The. Fuck.
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Lol
Honestly, this wasn’t that bad
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But it should be better, and that's what I strive for.
Okay, wow. Lot to take in for a first chapter.
SHORT REVIEW: I enjoy the beginning. I like the introduction to literally the only black character on Fimfiction, and it seems somewhat realistic, yet not. The beginning scene with Noah about to pull off "the greatest fuckin prank" kinda reminded me of the movies Carrie, but not in a bad way. I do think the details were a bit confusing, like Noah possessing an M4 rifle. Nonetheless I still enjoyed, and what this chapter lacked in detail clarity it made up for in the general storyline. Good job.
PO: I don't think Sunset stays a bad character for long. Also, Noah cursing is hella fun to read.
I will attempt to give a review every few chapters if not every chapter. Liking the story so far.