This was a good chapter. I'm definitely worried for Sunset (if she really is pregnant) because of all the stuff she has to deal with in the near future. Also I like how you didn't have Timber finish the Gaia Everfree story the way it did in the movie. That story was OK, but they kinda ruined it by having Timber yell out her name and everyone gasping.

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Oh, undoubtedly. I try to minimize as much cringe and whatnot when making these stories. As for Sunset, we'll just have to wait and see...