This and the previous chapter, are your best chapters yet!! I like how instead of the typical "another element of harmony" fanfic, where they just copy paste the whole story and just add the OC, you took the story and gave it a different approach. Instead of the OC distracting the villain or literally doing nothing, you had Noah defeat the villain. Not contributing to the defeat, but actually be the one who defeated Midnight.

Now this comment may feel like I'm reviewing a story that just ended, and that's because it legitimately feels like I just read the climax of a story. I may not be smart when it comes to writing a story, but the first two arcs can be cosidered its own book. The reason I think of that is because both arcs is about Sunset's character arc. I'm not saying that because "you should do that to your story", no; I'm saying this just to let you know why my review on this chapter felt like I'm reviewing the ending.

With that said, I'd like to see how this arc ends, and just a quick question. Will some of the Equestria Girls shorts be included for this story? I'd like to see how Noah reacts to some of their situations, such as the Main 7 running the school play.

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Indeed, I had an idea of Noah paring up with Sunset to take down Midnight after I saw how she absorbed the magic from the portal. And I didn't want Noah to be some sort of side character, I wanted the story to focus entirely on him and Sunset. Noah doing something like a distraction is ridiculous. Even without the Super Element, he’d try to take on Midnight.

Indeed as well. I could simply end Of All The Stars with the epilogue coming up, but something about stories ending on the, ”I Love You, ” note just doesn't work for me. I know you weren't saying I should, but I’d just wanted to say.

The epilogue to the arc should be coming today. As for Noah’s future adventures, I plan to have him and Sunset deal with many problems. I'd like to see how Noah deals with Twilight, and the threat she poses in taking Sunset from him. I'd like to see how they’d operate when it's just the two of them. I'd love to see how Noah would react to Equestria when Sunset eventually takes him. How he’d react to its people, the mane six, the princesses, and most importantly, Sunset’s family.

But as for the shorts without a conflict, or at least a significant one, I'd imagine Noah wouldn't care and that he’d let the Rainbooms deal with it. He's a conflicting character of himself. He hates having to do things, but he also hates being bored. So I'll just be writing ones with true conflict.

Thank you!😁