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Celestia and Luna CAN'T do Shit to Noah and his gang anyway. I mean they have Guns.

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Yeah, I'm actually probably gonna get rid of those. Weaponry doesn't exactly scream good for a story. Readers will probably think I'm a conservative or something.

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Well, Americans are pretty influential after all.

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What NO!!! Come on man. I seen other Stories where Guns, and other Weaponry are involved and I don't see them complain. Plus, it sounds almost like a GTA Crossover. And I like the Series.

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When I first started this series, I knew literally nothing about writing. It’s why there’s so many dislikes. The first chapter and arc are seriously bad as I look back at them. Especially after I’ve gained the amount of writing I have now. It’s not perfect, but it’s a thousand times better. Stories that feature protagonists with heavily modified weaponry aren’t treated very well for an abundance of reasons. It’s probably one of the major reasons as to why I have so many dislikes. Not to mention that all of Noah’s friends have heavily modified weapons as well.

It’d be wiser if I just removed all the weaponry, except for Noah’s gift from his father, and just made them normal African-American teenagers. You never see those types of people with heavily enhanced M4A1s and M82s. It just doesn't fit in MLP. I'm sure there are stories that have a lot of likes and include weaponry, but that's because it targets a specific audience. I'm trying to attract Sunset Shimmer readers, romance readers, and adventure readers. Not conservatives or whatever.

I wanna be able to finish this series, (and perhaps a sequel with one final adventure), with at least thirty more likes than dislikes. Besides, who knows what the final arc may hold for Of All The Stars.

Wink wink, nudge nudge.

How many chapters long will this story be?

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Like 94 total chapters... Lol

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I don't know. I seen Characters with Badass Weapons, and people in the comments like that. I think you saw the Wrong Stories in here. But nevertheless, having Noah keep his Power that resemble DBZ doesn't seem fair for his friends. You basically NERF his Friends without the Guns. And it might make them Envy Noah of ONLY having a Power.

And like I said, I like GTA, and the Guns looks cool. Besides, I don't think Noah can face more Bad Guys on his own. Sure, he got Sunset and the Rainbboms, but their NOT the type to fight and kill.

P.S. I seen the MLP World that have Guns in other Stories. But have the WW1, WW2, and Cold War Era Guns. So, that's something? 🤷

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When I normally think of good stories, I think of the ones with an audio version by Scribbler. I haven’t listened to all of them, but I haven’t come across a single story that includes guns. I want my story to be on par or at least close to those types of stories. And weaponry isn’t gonna get me there.

As for Noah’s friends, their envy would be meaningless because Noah has equestrian magic within him. He’s connected to Equestria, and his necklace contains it. Noah’s friends being envious would just be dumb because none of them have control over the magic and the forces that decided it so. If anything, it’s probably best that only Noah had powers considering the others don’t have the same clear sense of life he has.

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Okay then. I just like Anti Heroes with Guns that's all. Plus it's different than seeing Magic, or Anime Powers in other Stories for a change. 🤷