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I'm glad to have finally got it up here after so many years too. And I doubt the rating will be changing any time soon. But who knows, right?

This was an amazing read, and I hope more people come across it!

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Thank you very much! I hope more people take the time to read through this too. Feel free to pass it along to anyone you know.

Wow, it was an exciting adventure that took me all night. I don’t regret it anyway

P.S Will we see a sequel soon?

(Please say "yes")

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Dang, all in one night? I'm glad you liked it that much, thank you! If you don't mind me asking, what did you like about it specifically?

As for a sequel? I've got some ideas on where to take this dynamic duo next, so a sequel is pretty likely. As for the soon part, well, I took five years writing this one out and half of that was spend being burnt out/lazy. So if I do start writing it, I'm going to have to force myself into a writing schedule and stick to it. But knowing that someone out there wants more from me will definitely help in that regard.

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Well, I liked a lot. Starting with the elaboration of characters and high-quality dialogues and ending with a tolerable description of what is happening. Thanks for the answer and information on the sequel, I will look forward to it.

P.S. The comment may not be entirely clear as sometimes I had to use google translator. Since I still don't write well in English. (My native language is russian)

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Russian, eh? That's pretty cool. I have a lot of family that are from Brazil, so I understand how difficult English can be at times. Still, you write pretty well in English and I get what you are saying. And I'll work on making my descriptions more than tolerable next time. 😉

Again, thank you for reading my story. I appreciate it.

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Yep, English can be quite difficult at times, but you shouldn't oversimplify your texts, but thanks you again

And yes, I also appreciate that you appreciate that I read your story, lol

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Don't worry, I won't be oversimplifying anything anytime soon. Or at all. I don't think I would be able to do Intrepid justice if I dumbed things down writing wise.

I see the cover pic has changed.

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Yep. Figured it was high time I got a proper cover for this story. Give it a somewhat professional feel to this, you know?