An engineer transplanted from Earth tries to take his work with him to Equestria, but it's a mare's world here, and he's not taken seriously. Teaming up with a purple alicorn gives him a shot at making his dreams a reality.
I love how unique his Solution for a legacy is instead of just "boop found the magic thing I'm immortal/an alicorn now" like some stories, nothing wrong with those but this is really heartwarming and inventive. Really loving this story
You’re pretty sure six rounds in one sitting is a new record, for you. You’d lost track of how many it was for her. Ponies have garbage stamina. At least you’ll never have to worry about satisfying your herd.
Ayyy that's the limit before pain has a chance to hit the next day. Don't try 7 if you did anything strenuous that day.
10014850 I actually starting to want to see him ascend in some way. Not necessarily into a male alicorn, yet immortal for what he'll achieve. Not because he found a way, but because it's how their world works and he steped into it by accident.
...their world should survive draconequus of technology.
Eh, this wouldn't fit into a story like this one. Won't be right.
You’re pretty sure six rounds in one sitting is a new record, for you. You’d lost track of how many it was for her. Ponies have garbage stamina. At least you’ll never have to worry about satisfying your herd.
Usually pony x human really turns me off. Big time. Still does. 2 diff species, that is the fact that will always stand in my wah
HOWEVER You have provided such a deep emotional context to the scenario and even realism that I was actually able to appreciate it, even if it's still weird. That is a phenomenal accomplishment. Most outstanding praise.
Blueblood is silent for a long time, his gaze flicking from the tabletop in front of him to the two princesses and back again. When he finally speaks, it’s barely a hoarse whisper. “When do I leave?”
Harsh. Realistic portrayal of celestia and luna. But still harsh. Hopefully he learns and can change. That would be best ending(for a sequel)
”Exile is a very serious punishment, more serious than his crime deserved. We were harsh. However…” Her expression regains a bit of her usual calm. “…I believe firmly that ponies can be redeemed, and I modify my punishments accordingly. Sometimes this makes them less severe. Other times, like this one, it makes them moreso, but only conditionally. Should he learn the two lessons I set for him, and should he serve Cadance and Shining as well as he served us, his life in the Crystal Empire will be comfortable. Should he refuse those lessons, and refuse to serve, he will feel the full weight of his sentence, and it will crush him. Those two are aware of the circumstances of his crime; we discussed all this beforehand. They’ll ensure he’s handled properly. However, the core of his sentence remains the fact he is never welcome back into the country he loves, forever distant from the sovereigns he served his whole life.”
What the fuck you read my mind. Man that is some true authorship right there
You’re pretty sure six rounds in one sitting is a new record, for you. You’d lost track of how many it was for her. Ponies have garbage stamina. At least you’ll never have to worry about satisfying your herd.
You’d fucked her unconscious.
Oh wow, that... I don't want to sound perverted, but... fuck this.
I'm really quite jealous. Can't imagine pleasing Twilight that much.
Well, except for the six orgasms in one sitting thing. There's gonna be hell to pay for that later.
This story is starting to lose me. It originally presented itself as "let's bring engineering to Equestria" plus a minor romantic subplot, but the past few chapters have gone to Unfortunate Implications so increasingly obvious that it's a little baffling the author hasn't realized the subtext.
RGRE is generally a comedy trope. Nobody takes the poor human seriously, they all just want to protect the helpless little thing and pat him on the head and maybe protect him from over-aggressive other mares, all while he becomes increasingly frustrated by it. That's not at all what's going on here. The human here, everypony takes him seriously, Blueblood perceives him as a credible threat to Equestria because he's taking all the princesses, and he is in fact doing so.
Take just a moment...and in your mind imagine that instead of humans and ponies, just imagine that it's, for example...white people and black people. Or think of it as muslims talking about conquering white people by taking their women. Go ahead and replace humans and ponies in this story with whatever real life human equivalent makes you least comfortable, and think about what this story is saying. Consider the fact that the only male objecting to the "you're taking our women" ends up with those women ganging up on him and expelling him from their society. Then toss in a sprinkling of such oh-so-subtle lines as this:
You’re pretty sure six rounds in one sitting is a new record, for you. You’d lost track of how many it was for her. Ponies have garbage stamina. At least you’ll never have to worry about satisfying your herd.
What's the overall message this story is conveying? "You suck, we can satisfy your women better than you can, we're going to take all the best ones and they'll be grateful for it, and we're going to give them our children instead of yours and they'll be thrilled with that and they'll throw you away once they've had us."
Seriously, @Enganon: do you not see the subtext to your story? There are some seriously unfortunate implications here.
10022417 You lost me at the race bit but yeah, I see where your coming from. It seemed to have halted its actual plotline into sending equestria into a new age of industry, and sent itself through a rollarcoaster of "im better in every conceivable way"
...kinda feels like kirito but without swords and shit.
I mean, this whole fic was about Anon showing Twilight (and then the rest) they had to break down social norms (that stallions can't science) in order to progress. And then it wasn't anymore. Like the stupid herd hierarcy thing is all of a sudden treated like something he has to agree to.
Take just a moment...and in your mind imagine that instead of humans and ponies, just imagine that it's, for example...white people and black people.
I think you may have skipped over a more obvious 'sexist' implications to get to your 'racist' ones. This is a harem fic after all, and the reason such scenarios have appeal is because that is not how real women think...
But to play your game, this would be an average person from the 2200s coming back to a place where they would be a minority, and being considered smarter, stronger, more educated, more attractive, and betterin bed than their contemporaries. To which I say...
Yes? No shit sherlock? In that time I'd expect at least some transhuman tech to be established, meaning of course they would be advantaged in comparison to the downtimers. The average amount of humanity in the human race appears to be trending upwards as time passes, so they'd likely be a better person as well.
Or if you like, a black Muslim gay engineer being dumped in 1820 London, Paris, or Washington. Assuming they don't die in the first 24h, and come to actually get serious government attention? Given what they know about guns and germs and electricity, and evolution, and nuclear technology and computers and economics... They instantly become the most important person in the country, and the most desirable single person on the planet.
The 'from a vastly more technically sophisticated' and the 'from a slightly more liberal' culture may be the part you're missing out on.
I love how unique his Solution for a legacy is instead of just "boop found the magic thing I'm immortal/an alicorn now" like some stories, nothing wrong with those but this is really heartwarming and inventive. Really loving this story
Ayyy that's the limit before pain has a chance to hit the next day. Don't try 7 if you did anything strenuous that day.
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I actually starting to want to see him ascend in some way. Not necessarily into a male alicorn, yet immortal for what he'll achieve. Not because he found a way, but because it's how their world works and he steped into it by accident.
...their world should survive draconequus of technology.
Eh, this wouldn't fit into a story like this one. Won't be right.
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Usually pony x human really turns me off. Big time. Still does. 2 diff species, that is the fact that will always stand in my wah
HOWEVER
You have provided such a deep emotional context to the scenario and even realism that I was actually able to appreciate it, even if it's still weird. That is a phenomenal accomplishment. Most outstanding praise.
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Same
Harsh. Realistic portrayal of celestia and luna. But still harsh. Hopefully he learns and can change. That would be best ending(for a sequel)
What the fuck you read my mind. Man that is some true authorship right there
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Or ... he wrote in a way to make you come to the conclusion he wanted you to have. An even better author.
Ooh. Not going to delay any longer are you, Twi?
Oh wow, that... I don't want to sound perverted, but... fuck this.
I'm really quite jealous. Can't imagine pleasing Twilight that much.
Well, except for the six orgasms in one sitting thing. There's gonna be hell to pay for that later.
This story is starting to lose me. It originally presented itself as "let's bring engineering to Equestria" plus a minor romantic subplot, but the past few chapters have gone to Unfortunate Implications so increasingly obvious that it's a little baffling the author hasn't realized the subtext.
RGRE is generally a comedy trope. Nobody takes the poor human seriously, they all just want to protect the helpless little thing and pat him on the head and maybe protect him from over-aggressive other mares, all while he becomes increasingly frustrated by it. That's not at all what's going on here. The human here, everypony takes him seriously, Blueblood perceives him as a credible threat to Equestria because he's taking all the princesses, and he is in fact doing so.
Take just a moment...and in your mind imagine that instead of humans and ponies, just imagine that it's, for example...white people and black people. Or think of it as muslims talking about conquering white people by taking their women. Go ahead and replace humans and ponies in this story with whatever real life human equivalent makes you least comfortable, and think about what this story is saying. Consider the fact that the only male objecting to the "you're taking our women" ends up with those women ganging up on him and expelling him from their society. Then toss in a sprinkling of such oh-so-subtle lines as this:
What's the overall message this story is conveying? "You suck, we can satisfy your women better than you can, we're going to take all the best ones and they'll be grateful for it, and we're going to give them our children instead of yours and they'll be thrilled with that and they'll throw you away once they've had us."
Seriously, @Enganon: do you not see the subtext to your story? There are some seriously unfortunate implications here.
10022417 Just let people dream, honestly dude.
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You lost me at the race bit but yeah, I see where your coming from. It seemed to have halted its actual plotline into sending equestria into a new age of industry, and sent itself through a rollarcoaster of "im better in every conceivable way"
...kinda feels like kirito but without swords and shit.
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I was with you until that last bit.
I mean, this whole fic was about Anon showing Twilight (and then the rest) they had to break down social norms (that stallions can't science) in order to progress. And then it wasn't anymore. Like the stupid herd hierarcy thing is all of a sudden treated like something he has to agree to.
10022417
I think you may have skipped over a more obvious 'sexist' implications to get to your 'racist' ones. This is a harem fic after all, and the reason such scenarios have appeal is because that is not how real women think...
But to play your game, this would be an average person from the 2200s coming back to a place where they would be a minority, and being considered smarter, stronger, more educated, more attractive, and betterin bed than their contemporaries. To which I say...
Yes? No shit sherlock? In that time I'd expect at least some transhuman tech to be established, meaning of course they would be advantaged in comparison to the downtimers. The average amount of humanity in the human race appears to be trending upwards as time passes, so they'd likely be a better person as well.
Or if you like, a black Muslim gay engineer being dumped in 1820 London, Paris, or Washington. Assuming they don't die in the first 24h, and come to actually get serious government attention? Given what they know about guns and germs and electricity, and evolution, and nuclear technology and computers and economics... They instantly become the most important person in the country, and the most desirable single person on the planet.
The 'from a vastly more technically sophisticated' and the 'from a slightly more liberal' culture may be the part you're missing out on.
I enjoy this.