An engineer transplanted from Earth tries to take his work with him to Equestria, but it's a mare's world here, and he's not taken seriously. Teaming up with a purple alicorn gives him a shot at making his dreams a reality.
This was a very nice read. You managed to write a good HIE story that didn't devolve into Human meeting the alicorns, the alicorns immediately falling all over themselves with lust to "get some of that monkey D", said human then finds out that not only is he a sex magnet to all the mares but has the libido and stamina of Zeus to satisfy them all, cause reasons.
"Two thumbs up" Random Anon
"Well written, would read again" A Grey Faceless Human
"4.5 out of 5 stars, I would have given it a 5/5 but for the spelling errors" The 18 grammar Nazis who down voted this story and who should be beaten with an entire Webster's Dictionary Volumes A-Z Edit: 19 Grammar Nazis
"This was a fun read and it's going in my favorites library. I'm looking forward to this author writing more horsewords" The guy who actually read this story
The four of you continue looking at the head, once Twilight stops her circling. The black fabric sandwiched between the two frame layers contrasts with the steel of the outer frame atop it. You’ll have to keep her clean. Maybe not polished, but you’ll have to stay on top of any potential corrosion. Regular maintenance is essential, and you’re not sure how much she’ll be able to do herself. Not that you’d do any less than everything, to keep her in top shape. Even if not in a tub full of water, that’s like bathing your filly while she’s still unable, isn’t it? Maybe you could do this fatherhood thing after all.
For an engineer, he certainly doesn't know much about metallurgy. That, or he's unsure of how tp go about it. There are blends that can be lightweight and corrossion resistant. Heck, I'm surprised he never considered carbon fiber.
“Heh, we’re dressing her up already and she isn’t even born yet.”
”And another one of my friends already wants to race her.”
I find it rather interesting, in how this story manages to get by perfectly fine with just a mention or two of the Others. It's kind of funny, really. Like YES - you CAN have a nice story WITHOUT all that noise.
“Shift change.”
Yeah, why they're suddenly making this a death march, I don't know.
Loved this story. Loved the character development, the shifting perspectives, the look at the royalty's inner turmoil and their work toward healing. Loved the ending. My only worry -- I just finished watching Star Trek TNG all the way through again for what must be the 30th time.. Please, please, don't name her "Lal."
Very good read
Beautiful
can't describe this story in anything other than 3 words: very f**king awesome
Going into this story, I never expected it to turn out as sweet as it did definitely a new favorite.
This was a very nice read. You managed to write a good HIE story that didn't devolve into Human meeting the alicorns, the alicorns immediately falling all over themselves with lust to "get some of that monkey D", said human then finds out that not only is he a sex magnet to all the mares but has the libido and stamina of Zeus to satisfy them all, cause reasons.
"Two thumbs up"
Random Anon
"Well written, would read again"
A Grey Faceless Human
"4.5 out of 5 stars, I would have given it a 5/5 but for the spelling errors"
The 18 grammar Nazis who down voted this story and who should be beaten with an entire Webster's Dictionary Volumes A-Z
Edit: 19 Grammar Nazis
"This was a fun read and it's going in my favorites library. I'm looking forward to this author writing more horsewords"
The guy who actually read this story
This is the only story I think that's rgre that is actually finished and done well. Nice m8
Ikea directions are NOT clear okay?!
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Utterly unique. Heartwarming, sweet, and deep. It is simply beautiful.
And yes you can most def put that as praise for your story on your description
Sequel! Sequel! Sequel sequel!
Holy shit man, you have written probably the best RGRE fix on the site. You win.
Love it
Leery of the ethical implications of creating a daughter, but in certain respects I love that part of the story as well.
I know exactly what her name should be.
Eve.
And if they ever give her a brother, Apollo
For an engineer, he certainly doesn't know much about metallurgy. That, or he's unsure of how tp go about it. There are blends that can be lightweight and corrossion resistant. Heck, I'm surprised he never considered carbon fiber.
I find it rather interesting, in how this story manages to get by perfectly fine with just a mention or two of the Others. It's kind of funny, really. Like YES - you CAN have a nice story WITHOUT all that noise.
Yeah, why they're suddenly making this a death march, I don't know.
B E A utiful.
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What does it matter if she is flesh and bone, or metal and mind?
Loved this story. Loved the character development, the shifting perspectives, the look at the royalty's inner turmoil and their work toward healing. Loved the ending. My only worry -- I just finished watching Star Trek TNG all the way through again for what must be the 30th time.. Please, please, don't name her "Lal."
Beautiful.