“It’s Tadwell, actually. And yes, she’ll be waiting for you in her office. Right this way, please.” He says as he reaches towards a small device on his desk and presses a button. “Mayor Mare, You’re Ten o’Clock is here., I’m sending him in.”

There are two different of the same sounding word. "You're" = "You are" and "Your" = "Your"

Here is two examples for both words: "You're the best!" "I'm your best friend."

People get these two words confused for sounding the same.

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Yeah, I gotcha! I missed that one XD

“Have a good day, Mister Tint. I’m executing good things from you, don’t go disappointing me now!”

expecting?

“Have a good day, Mister Tint. I’m executing good things from you, don’t go disappointing me now!”

Now Mayor, there's no need to get violent!

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XD another one, not sure why it corrected to that

Most say you really can see the effort and passion on these pages keep it up loved the original but like the new rewrite aswell

Hm... Major Mare, Applejack and Cheerlie... I dig it

I don’t know what I was expecting, but the fact that this space is somehow even more cluttered and busy than the reception area does not surprise me even remotely. Stacks of paper surround a more distinguished, almost antique desk. It looks quite lovely. I bet it’s made out of Mahogany, very expensive material.

TFS DBZ reference, nice

Heh, the obliviousness of Rose is deflecting all the advances of the Mares !

Thank you for writing !

A problem with numeracy and equines is decimal, as its derived from tens, but then a pair of 4 digit appendages for griffins, dragons, diamond dogs, minotaurs etc not only gives base 8, but unicorns would point out that an Earth pony can count from 0 to 7 on three legs, standing on the 4th, and ten means one 8 and no 1s.

The Biggest problem that arises with this, is that because theres no digit available between 8 and 10, poor Rarity can never be dressed to teh nines, unless its a imaginary value thats better, greater than all possible single digit integers?

Like how in Watership Down, rabbits count one two three, many, so the rabbit born with teh Cassandra curse gets called Fiver because its a number that makes no sense?

Are these ponies obligate herbivores, like back in my world?

Fun fact, horses are actually not obligate herbivores. They occasionally kill and eat things like small birds or squirrels. Have fun with that image in your head.

Dude is so dense that even thoughts of advances just bounce off lmao I am loving this rewrite so far.

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Yup, so dense, in fact, I start to wonder when the gravitational well will start to form XD

👍

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Thank you very much!

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Yeah, I thought someone might appreciate that XD

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Bro is *not* used to being flirted with.

You're very welcome!

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neat ^^

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I have seen the video yes, but poor Rose has not DX

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Lol yeah, glad you are enjoying ^^

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Hopefully, we won't get to that point, lmao.

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💯

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but poor Rose has not DX

You mean 'lucky'. It's weird as fuck watching a horse kill and eat a small animal.

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That's a great question! Here lemme check something real quick.

Hmmm....

Yeah, I'm still pretty gay, actually.

So no.

Luckily I will still be giving warnings and making those sections easier to skip over, which I hope will suffice.

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If they go looking for that, it is usually due to them missing something in their diet, likely calcium.

That said, true obligate herbivores are extremely rare among mammals. Even herbivore specialists like pandas will kill and eat meat if they're missing needed nutrients.

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Obligate anything is rare. Most are specialists, like koalas.

I wonder if some mares will try to wrongarm themself into Rose Tints herd:
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It is a proven tactic to get children that way...

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They can try, but that sort of behavior is going to have major social consequences.

In my headcanon, the more a stallion and mare are attracted to each other during estrus/rut, the more intense the effect of the scent is on them. It's got a love magic component.

So if two ponies already really like eachother it'll basically be impossible for them not to jump each other's bones once they get in proximity.

If two ponies don't know each other too well, it might make them a bit hot and bothered, but not nearly enough that they would go at it willy nilly unless they were both feeling it.

And of course, two ponies who don't like each other or dislike each other would not be attracted to each other during estrus/rut.

Attempting to force yourself on an unwilling partner during estrus with that in mind is therefore considered just as bad as it would be here, and can be prosecuted similarly. They take it seriously because the last thing they need with so few males is to go around traumatizing them to the idea of reproduction.

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Add that to a Cadance chapter! That would make great world building 👍

I don’t know what I was expecting, but the fact that this space is somehow even more cluttered and busy than the reception area does not surprise me even remotely. Stacks of paper surround a more distinguished, almost antique desk. It looks quite lovely. I bet it’s made out of Mahogany, very expensive material.

I haven’t read the orginal, but I dig it. Rose is definitely DENSE, to say lightly. Then again, I have read a few threads about men missing obvious signals, so it doesn't hurt as much. Guilty of one those myself.

Good luck, hope there is more.

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"The Denser The Material, the Heavier The Pipe" is a trope I'm admittedly quite fond of, yes ^^

There will be, at least once a week if I have anything to say about it, and I do!

While enjoying the simple offering, my mind begins to wander. Are these ponies obligate herbivores, like back in my world? God , I hope they aren’t. I don’t care how cool magic is, I’m not sure a world without bacon is a world I can survive in for long.

I may or may not have posted this previously, but actually...

1/3 joking: Don't make me bringup the sandwich.

I look at myself in the vanity mirror sitting in the corner of the bedroom, striking a few little poses from different angles. I feel good, I smell good, and from what I can tell, I look good. Yep, I’m ready for that appointment!

It is, after all, a vanity mirror.

“Well, uh, I mean agsjazhgdagjhfd- yes . Yes, that sounds very nice, actually!” I say, excitement quickly creeping into my tone once I get over how utterly flabbergasted I am by the very generous offer being presented to me. I reach over the desk, firmly grasping the mayor's front hoof in both mine. I shake it fervently before, and for some reason that eludes my conscious reasoning, I plant a kiss on the back of it as if she is a noblewo-er…noble mare.

What

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Chicken Butt

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Pegasus butt is superior.