I like it Keep it up :)

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I appreciate it, glad you're enjoying ^^

Rewrite wasn't somethin I was expecting- but it definitely shows keeping this story on my mind and high in m' favorites was a good idea!

It's very fortunate that Rose wasn't more taken advantage of, given his complete lack of social cues. Thankfully, Cheerilee was able to help him out, though he's definitely gonna need more understanding to prevent more incidents.

Being homeless and hungry is no joke, just see two dead people not even old. Dead leaning on a church last week. Also a simpel cold can also be very deadly without any home, running water, decent hygienic options or any medical aid.

I think…I think someone just tried to pick me up.

But she didn’t lift you at all?

I would be slapped, but all of the guys I know would say I’m lucky that she-”

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Yeah no shit. Been there myself before tbh it's a bad way. The nauseating uncertainty of not knowing where your next night will be spent or where your next meal is coming from is terrifying.

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Pffft, thanks for the heads up

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Yeah tbh, female dominated society + complete lack of awareness about local customs + already being kind of socially awkward + being conditioned by his previous society to unilaterally welcome female attention + being hot is not going to be a formula that is going to derive many pleasant results, poor guy

Time to lock in and do some studying for the hour or so I still have before I need to go and have dinner at the farm.

Locking in.
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Really glad this is alive again. A rewrite wasn't expected but the new pacing is much better and I'm guessing you're gonna change the future plot a bit with Rose's relationship with the 6 and the royals?

Ganbare rose!

I mumble as I avert my gaze. I avert my gaze and say softly, my ears flattening on top of my head

Got a repeat in there.

She interrupts me with a small chuckle, throwing her mane over with a flick of her neck. “Well, maybe what I just left in your little saddlebag there can fix that. If that farmhoof isn’t doing it for you, feel free to come and see me sometime, I know how to make sure a stallion has his needs met.” She says with a small wink before slipping herself off of the bench and trotting away with a satisfied, almost smug look on her face.

Uh... is she in heat or something?

Oddly reminds me of a bit from Quest For Glory 5: Dragon Fire.

"If you see something you like, come see me."
"If you like what you see, then come see me."

“ Rose .” She says simply, cutting me off with a firm, quiet utterance of my name. “I don’t know how things work where you are from, but I do know that if somepony is touching you or talking to you in a way that makes you uncomfortable, that isn’t okay. If somepony does that to you again, you are completely within your rights and expected to tell them you aren’t comfortable with it.“ she says as her glare softens into a sympathetic, almost pitying expression. “Okay?”

Basically,

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TRUEEEEEEE XD

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The town motorcycle has a sticky throttle.

So, we're not just pew Tirek, but pre Twilight in ponyville. I see