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Seems a little odd that his hooves are all that scuffed up, because unless I missed a missed a month long time skip somewhere, he should have been...manifested into existence a few days ago and just did some walking. And that would speak poorly to the quality of pony hooves.
11858882
they were not described as scuffed, simply very lightly chipped. like, lightly enough that a glass was required for her to notice it. In the same way, someone with long nails might chip them a bit by being too rough with them.
11858855
IT'S NOT ENOUGH!!! WE NEEDZ MOAR!
really love the rewrite so far
Priceless
I never give idea to horn maintenance, I have to fix that.
Great chapter!
Meeting Rarity in the spa makes a lot of sense.
Is Pinkie Pie out of town? Little pink head will have otherwise a frown unside down not finding the new ponynin town.
I wonder what that odd look was for by Rarity?
11859099
Obviously she wants to try out fashion on him:
I didn't get to read the original, but I'm definitely enjoying this rewrite <3
Good thing he didnt go with the Blackadder response.
Ok then, Bob.
Heh, is Rarity rizzing him up ?
Thank youfor writing ! Loved the apart of the horn care !
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If she is, unfortunately for her Rose will *not* be sticking out his gyatt for the rizzler today XD.
glad you liked it ^^
I'm glad this is getting rewritten. No shade at the old version, love it a lot, except Celly being rly paranoid but the rewrite feels more like a slow burn with better pacing
You’re fine my good author, it was a pleasant read. Certainly something different.
11859355
Whole heartedly agree my fellow reader!
Just don’t sneeze and blow a hole in the wall.
I would prefer rubber clip-ons.
Just finished reading through the Archived version, and if that is worth considering a rewrite then I shall follow this story excitedly.
11859580
glad to hear my work has another fan, thanks!
11859581
That's the fastest an author has replied to any comment I've put down pm this site lol.
I would also like to thank you for keeping that work archived for current and new readers of your work. That was a genuinely entertaining story, problems be damned.
Hope the rewrite does you proud, I know how doubts can plant poisonous seedlings. Pretty sure I have at least 4 incomplete but structurally sound stories of my own that will never see the light of day because of that.
I like the direction so far
11859608
Thanks ^^
Holy hell that was fast
11859610
Lol yeah im doing some editing on site rn so I just answer em when I see em ^^
11859611
Ah fair enough
. She finally speaks again after a long few moments. I own a
You're missing an opening quotation for when Rarity starts speaking at the "I own a" section.
Significantly prefer this version so far. By this point in the original story we had like five irons in the fire, he'd already revealed his reincarnated status, and it just... wasn't very good. Glad to see we're going for a more moderate pace here. (Also really hope he keeps his secrets to himself this time.)
Ah yes, the simps are the mares
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:? Could you elaborate on this?