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Why isn’t there a dark tag?
Didn't feel like it needed one yet tbh. Wouldn't wanna pull in people expecting some actually fucked shit when things haven't really gotten cooking yet, ya know?
Great chapter, I wonder who the wisp is?
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We'llll seeeeeeeee >:3
Well, Rose my boy, prepare for your life to become interesting
Oh boy, here we go again.
I recently reread the archived version of the story and I remember this. At least it's more detailed and appropriately integrated.
That said it was also my least favorite part of the story, I dunno, I always feel put off by mysterious figures who suddenly appear like this. Maybe it's just me.
At least the other parts are quite enjoyable and I look forward to more.
Oh, speaking of archive, your archive has a lot of double chapters, repeats of the previous ones, dunno if you wanna clean that up a bit or not.
12- Generosity is a Rarity, and One that Suits You
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Great new chapter
Rarity sure seem to be interested in Rose one way or another.
Hmm wisp of smoke typically means Nightmare, however calling Pinkie a Kindred and loving to make scenes makes me think Discord. :P
Couple errors I noticed:
Hah! Yeah, figures.
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The dialogue doesn't read like Discord, so it's possible that this is a new antagonist.
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The original version of this on AO3 is tagged with Stephen King's The Dark Tower so maybe it's a character from there?
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That they drool over stallions and make the moves, I wasn't complaining author
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Oh no I didn't take it as one, I was genuinely confused lol.
You so know Bing has a free AI art generator right?
A genius i see
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I won't pretend like I have some high horse to sit on about ai art. I'm just ass at prompt generation and prefer to pay someone I know will get it right lmao.
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Could be! He's not doing anything a healthy unicorn with a fully developed thaumic system shouldn't be able to do.
Sure getting it down (if extremely sloppily) in a couple of days indicates talent, but you wouldn't call me a genius for figuring out how to write a script to open a text file using C in a few days, would you? Especially not if I almost bricked my PC the on first attempt XD
I like the story. Can't wait for more
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Always glad to hear from a satisfied reader ^^
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Can confirm there is a character from that series in the mix already >:3
New cover art!
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New cover art? New cover art! (Old one is still good tho )
Is that perhaps a Dark Tower cutie mark I see?
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Very Pog that it was not mistaken for a Christmas tree this time ngl. yes it is ^^
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Not going to lie, that was my first thought
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Never heard of The Dark Tower and for a while I'd actually had no clue this fic was a crossover. Just seemed like a normal alt-universe isekai.
Interesting read regardless.
Ah. The old art was really charming, kind of sad to see it go.
Rose get a assistant like Twilight has Spike?
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Or something else entirely?
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There is still a story in Fimfiction with it around if you mean the one where Rose is cursing.
Looks like we're still running with that not-Discord plotline. Hopefully this version involves less anthro ponies.
I wonder if Celestia will be an asshole with no explanation again
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Could be Eris instead; I don’t recall offhand which gender version this world was supposed to “officially” have in the original, and in any event if there’s any sort of entity that has a built-in excuse to pop out of one fanfic into another, a spirit of chaos would be pretty much it.
Wrong "pore"
Ouch. That's a harsh review.
Wow. All of that in one breath!
That's seven! Not bad.
In my mother's words, "First you get good. THEN you get fast."
ok before he was a pony he was a human before he was a human he was an evil king, I speak evil because it's probably nightmare moon who is calling him king
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Moonie’s prison has gaps that respond to chaos magic, huh?
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Erm actually the magic sealing her wavers and her power is at its peak during the full moon 🤓👆
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Uh huh. Keep pretending you aren’t foreshadowing what you’re foreshadowing.
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You fooo, little did you know I'm actually foreshadowing a secret third thing