Three heroes ripped from their own reality to be imprisoned in... Equestria? Follow Edel, Lorane, and Regal on their journey on their epic adventure as they explore this strange land called Equestria, discover what i's like to live like a pony, and try to find a way back home before it's too late...
As the story goes, the prologue will be more explained, so Don't worry too much! It only becomes more and more surreal as the main heroes discover the peaceful atmosphere of Equestria as opposed to the violent nature of their home, which has in turn caused them to be mistrusting of others and always expecting a fight from other creatures, pony or not. As they live in Equestria, they learn some ponies can be trusted, and others still not.
Chapters (15)
A couple things I'm wondering about:
1. Why was Regal's horn snapped off?
2. Why were their hair and eyes such crazy colors??
3. How come a human can use magic?!
That's all. This is just after reading the prologue, mind you.
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Thank you for reading and to answer:
1. Yet to be revealed
2. The original designs were anime style when my old friend drew them back in middle school many years ago, hope that will explain that!
3. In the world of Durandel there exists mages who are born with an excess of mana (Yes I know the terms are unoriginal, but this was back in middle school) which is the force that allows life to be possible. Mages are able to bend this mana into forms of energy and mold the energy into anything from spells to life.
I hope you will continue to read it!
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And thank you for the stache, mine ran away this morning 
Thank you for the feedback! And I'm glad you're enjoying it, seeing positive comments really helps trust me!
Great story.I definitely want to see more.This story in my opinion needs more than just 5 thumbs up.
Kael... you mean Thomas Kael? From "The Left Hand of God"?
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Thanks, the 1 thumbs down was bugging me a little
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No, I haven't read the Left Hand of God but it looks interesting. Just coincidence Kael sounds like Cale
hmm....
I believe you, continue with this awesome story and you shall not be the next victim of the left hand of god, bringer of death.
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Will do; I'm making the chapters much longer from now on, so it's going to take a bit longer than usual!
1173314 thats okay, as long as your still writing
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I plan to see this through to the end, unless I get a lot of people hating it, then I would take it down. But as of now, I will finish, I won't leave anyone - I mean anypony hanging
1177344 You could probably turn this into an official book, I don't know why anyone would hate it.
just put a warnig on the cover that even though it is a my little pony book it is not for young kids
Hmm... is all i can say
also do you like my pic?
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What do you mean by Hmm...? And yes Flying Tanks are awesome!
1178707 i meant i really didnt want to put much thought into it ( im lazy ) and now IM WATCHING YOU
The secret has been revealed shitstorm on 'regal'
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Sorry for the second response, but after re-reading the prologue I've decided: I am going to edit the prologue very soon, I think I will cover these points, and probably the battle before they begin to run out of the fort. I don't want to talk about too much when they are human, then I'd be tempted to keep talking about the history of their world: Durandel, and the lore, culture...
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And.. done. I provided a few paragraphs of background in the prologue. Hope it helps!
wait... did he get his body back or not?
I guess that's for the next chapter,
GET IT UP NOW!!!
OH MY GOD REGAL GOT HIS BODY BACK AND NOW HAS POWERS STRONGER THAN KAEL ORIGANILY THOUGH OHMYGODOHMYGODOHMYGOD
Oh god there both in it and they might just make a new body but regal will shove keal(kebal) out and into the new vessel
Ohhhkkaaaaayyyyyy shes a traiter
SHITSTORM INCOMING!!!
1224996 is it from a game or did you make this entire thing up in your head and if you did well damn nice job heres a rd cute face and a mustache
interesting set up so we no near nothing about them so you can easily build charecter not bad
imma going to comment on all your chapters so u do not feel lonely good story also to future people FIRST
1144404 love your story dude by the looks of it the story could be very popular please respond for some weird reason i want a good author to respond idk please
very original but how did you think of this off the top of your head imposibiru
StarPrism do not let it bug you it is a lie like the cake ROAR
lOVE THE MOTHERBUCKING STORY if thats okay (lol fluttershy
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First and is Regal gong to get back to normal i do not like seeing rainbow sad
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Created the entire thing years ago, I thought about making it an rpg game, but it never really took off. Thank you
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Thanks, I appreciate the feedback positive and negative alike, I am glad you're enjoying it
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Read on
FOR.THEBLAST TIME at authors not IMNOT A.PONY!!!