Painless, a young resident physician at Manehattan East Side Memorial Hospital, drew the short lot and finds himself working through Hearth's Warming. Tonight he has but one seemingly pointless task - to keep the dead company.
When a spell goes wrong at Sugarcube Corner, the Cake Twins are fused into a single body. Naturally, being horny young teenagers, they use the opportunity to "explore" their new form.
Hum, the writing is really rough and too much of a frantic rush to get the ball rolling on the plot, take your time in developing your story. keep it up good luck
don't be nervous. Everyone mostly make some mistakes... your job is to try to not rush the fiction out.
Hum, the writing is really rough and too much of a frantic rush to get the ball rolling on the plot, take your time in developing your story. keep it up good luck
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Tysm for the input and encouragement!!! I promise I’ll try my best to improve the quality of this story!!!
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And thank you as well!! It really means a lot to me!
Like the opening to the syory
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Tysm!
Well written chapter and can't wait to read the next chapter