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Celestial Twilight


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The Future of Magic is uncertain, Twilight Sparkle, the ruler of Equestria, more powerful than her predecessor, Princess Celestia and Princess Luna, but that was when she had her friends close. Twilight Sparkle is left with a conundrum though, she will live many lives, grow older and so will her friends but what will that mean for them? Twilight Sparkle is an Alicorn, a mixture of Unicorn and Pegasus pony, rare few become such and serve a very special purpose in the sovereignty of Equestria and is also an immortal pony, her friends are not however and all life that starts much eventually end...

But she soon faces an impossible scenario, what... happens when she outlives her friends? The key of her purpose is those friends, they have given her support and strength and power but their time is coming to a close... What will she do? New forces are rising in the lands of Equestria as they smell the blood in the water, Twilight has to face reality that she will out live her very purpose and then what? Her future is uncertain and Equestria is threatened by more than just evil but disharmony is beginning to take root as the ones that held power and domain slip into a new and uncertain future.

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You may not know this but there a mixture of all three pony races Pegasus, unicorn, and earth ponies.

9858303
Sure but it seems a bit redundant since earth ponies are hardly dissimilar to that of the other two races since the only defining factor of earth ponies is their abilities to farm lands, hardly something that can be separated from the abilities of an alicorn.

9858315
True that is in the show in the comic that they are still writing with ponies live longer usually have sturdier bodies and more resilient diseases And regarding the growing crops it’s most likely that heal the land the more they live there.
They don’t really give a clear description on how it works Just that it does.

9858319
Hmm I figured perhaps the more prominent attributes considering an earth pony addition to an Alicorn could be resilience to strain, diseases and also the addition of stronger, sturdier bodies as well... But most of my information is based off the show, they never mention anything about earth ponies being a prominent addition to being an Alicorn, and it still does feel quite redundant since the other two races only have a single major difference from earth ponies it's rather implied anyways that an Alicorn is all 3 of course, seems pointless to mention really.

You forgot one thing in the bio of this story, "earth ponies", alicorns are a mixture of "all three tribes" not just horn heads and feather dusters.

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Very much understood, however I did address this with user "Oops door" in the comments if you wish to read over those messages. Know i'm not excluding "Earth ponies" because they don't bring a major factor to being an "Alicorn" I'm excluding them because they are already implied as the base of the two other races in all four races, being that they all look the same way save specific functions. Unicorns only add magic and a horn, Pegasus only add wings to the body of an earth pony, Alicorns are the implications of the two combined on the body of a earth pony, so it felt rather useless to include them considering anyone can blatantly see what they are.

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Ach-um, what you see can be an illusion, and with earthpony magic being so intuitive well, of coarse you can't see it unless you actually "see" them using it.
Stamina speed and strength, these are the aspects of the earth pony that "their" magic affects, with Muad Pie being a prim example when she saved her sister.

Precede with big brain moment

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Earth ponies dont have magic or flight, they rely on pure physical prowess and not all are good at their one good attribute like fluttershy isnt good at flying like rainbow dash and rarity isn't good at magic like twilight, but some are actually more like earth ponies than unicorns or pegasus. But earth ponies cant be good at anything more than what they are at least delving into magic or flight. Yet they are the most important of the three as they are able to do a little of everything despite their limitations.

Just because I dont point them out specifically doesnt mean they arent important. But that's exactly why I dont bring them up, because anyone with a mind knows what an earth pony is and what their capabilities are and doesnt need me to explain the redundancy of what everyone with a brain of their own can figure out alone.

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