Minor hiccup with this one; Tyto is never given a proper introduction. For half of the story he's simply the "Camp Leader", making it very sudden and just a little bit confusing when his name is first used, especially since it's used very often after that.

(Beyond that, what the heck was he even doing so far away from camp?)

Not my thing but i was impressed by the sheer number and variety of feces euphemisms.