A young colt who works at Sweet Apple Acres tells his mom about his day, and then says goodnight like he does every night.
A heartwarming tale for Nightmare Night or Halloween (if you are human)
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DougtheLoremaster
You can't give up your laughter, cause you're scared of a little pain~. Writing to relieve PTSD. Enjoy my misery <3 you all. Discord: dougtheloremaster
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This story sounds like it needs a horror tag. Why doesn't it have one?
9787201
because it isn't a horror story. Nightmare Night is Hallows Eve or Halloween for ponyville.
This is great -- it has a pleasantly melancholy Ray Bradbury-ish vibe to it.
Nicely done!
P.S. You might want to replace the "Sad" tag with "Drama", just so readers don't get the wrong impression and miss the upbeat ending.
9787782
I was experimenting with a different writing style and tagging it was actually hard...from the no MC to the plot...thanks for the advice!
also glad you enjoyed it. <3
Nice story
10342028
Glad you enjoyed it!
10342055
I did enjoy.
I love Halloween.
My decorations never come down.....
You should try writing a gorefic. You would make a pretty good one I bet.
10342386
I have, quite a few actually
I recommend Don't Say Her Name
The Rock's in Her Head
10342483
Great stories your a good writer. Have You wrote a torture porn story yet? You would do quite well on that
10342793
It's easy to write stories based on RL experience. Glad you enjoy my tales.
10342801
I agree and Your welcome. Do You think You might write a torture porn story? By that I mean a story simaler to Cupcakes
10342808
I write all genres. If you search hard enough, I'm sure you'll find something to enjoy.
10342812
That's cool. I mostly enjoy gore stories even Cupcakes (Yes that Cupcakes)
10342816
yes and? Cupcakes was an objectively badly written shock fic, just like Rainbow Factory: Good premise, bad execution. Any brute can torture a reader with shock; it should never be that gore is a focus rather than a tool. It isn't torture porn it is grimdark and yes I write those. The ones I write are not E for everyone.
I recommend trying other Authors. Mine more or less rely on psychological terror and events based on my life.
I suggest "The thing in the corner of her eyes."
Very well done grimdark.
10342824
I agree it's not the beat story ever but it's what got Me hooked on grim dark fics in the first place. I have read better eg Something Sweet To Bite and also Butterflies were both much better. I really only like Cupcakes for that reason.
I'm gonna write something Halloweenie in a few months but need to think of death ideas I have got some
1 Kid eats candy eventually getting sick and exploding into chocolately mess.
2 a woman being chased by a dude in a Pumpkin mask gets killed then has candy inserted inside Her.
3 some kid goes into a chocolate place and falls into a chocolate mixer and gets solified into chocolate (Yes I did rip off Charlie and the chocolate factory)