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Fast Cars, Racing Hearts

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Petrol Head, a pint-sized vehicle geek and designer, hears noises in her scrap yard and goes to investigate, amazed by who she sees

Aria Blaze, after losing her magic with her sisters, tries to make a dishonest living and slips up one morning

Will the punk princess and the girl with engine oil in her veins find love, or remain strangers?

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Petrol_Head

Petrol_Head #1 · Aug 2nd, 2019 · · ·

Please let me know what you guys didn't like so I can improve my writing

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Chrome Reader #2 · Aug 2nd, 2019 · · ·

The details written are good, but the dazzlings are somehow off to what they would be after getting defeated,their characters I mean, and the romance part becomes a sudden move there. For reference, you could read other stories that depicts the dazzlings characters to widen your perspectives.

There is still parts missing and I like to you make good work of it.