• Member Since 9th Aug, 2012
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Lately, Luna has had a crush on a guard named Shade Spell, however, she knows she could never date him. until, of course, one day she wakes up to find she's switched bodies with Shade's fillyfriend.

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Please don't blame me for any stupid content- I wrote this at 3:00 am and I really should get to sleep at some point.:ajsleepy: Oh, and spelling errors everywhere. I swear I'll fix them once my brain starts working properly.

Hmm, sounds like a self insert. I dunno, il give it a read.

Pre-Comment:

Wow I never thought about a Luna-guard-guard's fillyfriend.....or is fillyfriend of.... oh forget it.

:facehoof: Stop trying to explain this like marefriend of luna's guard..... I think that's how you say it.

YOU can't even say it correctly!

:twilightblush: *embarrassed laugh* Ok. you got me.

Let's just read it.

Pen Stroke may be outraged. :twilightangry2:

What is that ending?!? It… It's just… No.
All that "Fluttershy become berserk because of her strange new friend" non-sense feel like randomly put here due to a sudden lack of inspiration.

It's a shame, with a better ending that story can be a "not that bad" one. (Even if I don't see why Luna can't have a guard for colt-friend. Especially since Cadence is married to Shining Armor.)

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