Alphas. Normal ponies, with extraordinary abilities. They live among us, pretending to live a "normal" life. But they still exist. One in every ten ponies is an Alpha. However, some Alphas have chosen a not so normal life, abusing their abilities and using them for crime. This is where Dr. Omega's team of Alphas comes in.
Kind of a parody/crossover of the Syfy show Alphas. I just randomly thought it would be cool to write something like this. If you havent seen the show, you might as slightly lost as to what the story is about. But, you'll probably get the hang of it. Please enjoy!
Chapters (3)
This wasn't very good
wasn't bad but wasn't good
but also wasn't bad
when i saw the title i was skeptically hopeful, is there finally an alpha mlpfim crossover and then i read the first couple words and i was like
it is!
now to read it
i've a been able to figure out who most of the main characters are in relationship to there tv counterparts but there's one member of the team who i really cant figure out who Chime is, i know she is either she has to be either Rachel or Nina, most likely Nina, but the problem is her alpha ability is wrong, Nina can push others into doing what she says but Chime got angry and yelled at him instead of pushing him, if that is the case, where is Rachel?
i hope the bios will provide more light on this matter
for now i'll give it a track see what happens
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I'm not directly chaining the main characters of the actual show with the characters in the story. Completely different people with different abilities. It's based on the general concept of alphas, but not an actuall crossover. Although I might add some chameos.
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May I ask for your opinion as to why it wasn't good?
1197138 It was really hard to follow and you should have done a non action intro like the pilot episode and tell about each ponies powers
Please continue this story.