When a Magical Pegasus is warped to Ponyville and befriends the mane six, things start to heat up! This is my first fanfic, so any comments and advice are greatly appreciated. Rated T for minor language and minor sexuall content. Please enjoy! Features OC Void (as shown in my avatar pic)
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What? they have individual chapter options for a reason.
I would seriously recommend that you chop this up into separate chapter sections. It'll make your work a lot easier to get into, as petty as that may seem.
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Ya this was before I understood that.
I might fix it if I'm not lazy or something
O.O THE TEXT WALLS THEY BUUUUUUUUURRRRRRRRRRRRRRRNNNNNNNNNN
I made this offence in my first fic....break the paragraphs up and divide this puppy into correct chapters if not it gets confusing
do this and do my standby get an editor and have them do the hard part... >;3 thats my plan and It always works for me
Sure sure
I am now working on separating the chapters.
If the chapter title is different then the one on the page, that is my fault. So please let me know if there are any more mistakes. Thnx!
I'd prefer you make chapters in the thousand word range. First!
Reminds me of Portal for some reason.
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Um...
It's just that there are alot of chapters. The lengths of each are pretty diverse so I'm afraid you'll have to take what you can get. I would totally do that if there was like only 5 chapters, but seeing as I have an entire fic on one page, that would be alot of trouble.
I see mistake! "He heard someone call out Voooiiiddd!" Y U NO CORRECT!
Somepony!
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Ah point taken. That may happen throughout the fic. I try not to overuse words.
I'm trying to think of mythical creature that makes people fall in love with it.
Heh heh, almost sexually molested him in his sleep.
S*** getting crazy!
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By the way, some majorly epic character development happens on chapter 12.
SPOILERZ!
Good story, needs more naughty rainbow and longer chapters
576188
I agree.
Omg! Finally done separating! Whew!
woohoo.
Random Brony approves!
Sudden ending is sudden.
nice story
little long though but still great!
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Long stories are best stories
why are these chapters so short?