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under the cloak

a showpony and his daughter visit ponyville after a show the showpony ask spike to hangout with his daughter so she can have a friend

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Zet Rock

Zet Rock #1 · Jun 18th, 2019 · · ·

It is rough but the idea is solid and hope you write a sequel. If this is your first Story, the only thing holding it back is grammar and other good writing tips. More proofreading. When I wrote my first, second, and third chapter of my story, I didn't proofread enough.
Okay, I think the dragon/sea dragon hybrid is a cool idea. I can see potential.